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d.knape

Mon 6th Apr 2020 09:56

we need to quarantine those who actually HAVE the Virus
and let the rest of the people go back to work.
If not, we are talking about a Global Depression.
Very sad.

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d.knape

Sun 5th Apr 2020 04:46

hey M.C.
did not know that about the Western
and the character saying he was named "Bluebonnet".
Wasn't that strange.
Yes, the Bluebonnet is our state flower
and in the springtime, they bloom all over in great seas of blue!

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d.knape

Sat 4th Apr 2020 03:11

aha! A road beautifier, in a roundabout way! ?

thanks for your comment and insight.

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d.knape

Fri 27th Mar 2020 19:09

Paul McCartney wrote it better than I did.
but my poem had a humorous slant at the end.

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d.knape

Wed 25th Mar 2020 02:31


thanks M.C.
?

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d.knape

Tue 24th Mar 2020 09:55

Thanks Master of Ceremonies-
Always appreciate your comments.
Thank you for reading "Standing In Line".
Did you have to stand in line to do it?
?

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Philipos

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 20:42

Thanks MC will get to it. Good of you to spot it. P. ?

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Wendy Higson

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 12:40

Thankyou for your comments take care keep safe love Wendy x

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Philipos

Sun 22nd Mar 2020 00:04

Hi MC and thank you for your recent comment on one of my poems. Truth is I can't pin-point the particular piece you mean as my poetry has been rolling off the production line just lately. If you could guide me to the spot a little more, I would happily look at it again and respond accordingly. Thanks. P.

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d.knape

Fri 20th Mar 2020 10:21

Clever response EmCee!!

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Philipos

Wed 18th Mar 2020 17:20

Gosh MC - just been going through some of your recordings. What great talent there is here. Well done you.

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Philipos

Wed 18th Mar 2020 17:09

Leave to Speak M.C. Thanks for the stirring response. I wonder what Sgt Wilson might have said ?

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d.knape

Tue 17th Mar 2020 11:35

For elders
we hunger
like father
and mother,
they being
our rudder
still... wish I
was younger!
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d.knape

Wed 11th Mar 2020 02:46

The poem "Stationary Bike" was just written in jest.
I did not really have a heart attack.
the poem however did cause Others
to have heart attacks!
?
(Jest is in South Wales.)

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Tom

Sun 8th Mar 2020 17:39

Hi Mark, sorry, I've just seen your comment on my profile. I think you're onto something there for sure. Got to look for the positives and share and amplify those thoughts and feelings; especially, as you say, in the face of the modern culture of negativity. Wise words indeed. Cheers, Tom.

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d.knape

Sat 7th Mar 2020 04:42

iamopposedtoapostrophes. ?

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d.knape

Sat 29th Feb 2020 12:37

Mind over matter
it matters not,
a small recall
is what I got,
My memory
is not so hot,
just can't recall
what I forgot!
?

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d.knape

Fri 28th Feb 2020 13:54


My life was fine
and duly mapped
but now at paper straws
I grasp
apparently my mind
just snapped
and now it's lost
not on the map!

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Philipos

Thu 27th Feb 2020 17:21

Hi MC re Tempest. First of all thank you for your detailed response, and secondly how interesting your previous places of abode. Sadly the former sites of Police Stations are now but history - I have often shared your interest in them. I once read a poem of a former Bobby from days when Shooters Hill was closed - the main lament being the banter going on between Bobbies and the canteen staff. The canteen culture seemed to be the glue keeping everything together. It is an era now sadly lacking - especially as facilities now have to be shared with council offices - where the canteens are supposed to be appropriate places for shared experiences of the grimmest kind. Let's hope there is an upturn and pretty soon at that. P. ?

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d.knape

Thu 27th Feb 2020 03:41


good point about who is a weed or not.
my poems are weeds
they pop up
where you least expect.

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d.knape

Mon 17th Feb 2020 11:30

Your mouth agape
so eat a grape-
Recover from my
poetic mistakes!

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Tom

Sun 16th Feb 2020 00:48

MC your comments on Damon's poem today were really inspiring. I just wanted to thank you for that.

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d.knape

Sat 15th Feb 2020 02:30

I'll be gone for two days.
Fill in for me.

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d.knape

Fri 14th Feb 2020 03:50

Lumbar Spinal Stenosis
is worse than Neurosis
yet It couldn't be worse than
extreme Halitosis!

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d.knape

Sat 8th Feb 2020 23:18

wow. Miss Tarry was unique!
What a special gift she gave you.
Do you still have the poem?

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d.knape

Sat 8th Feb 2020 12:33

My thought is that my thoughts are narrow-
they fly away like English Sparrows.
?

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d.knape

Fri 7th Feb 2020 03:53

If you have diabetes
switch to Wheaties!
(an American cereal )

?

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d.knape

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 03:52

Junk mail deserves to be tossed
into the waste basket.
I don't know about you,
but that's about the only mail
we get anymore.
The computer has taken over.

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d.knape

Thu 30th Jan 2020 12:20

thank you for reading "Wild Oats".
Do you have Cheerios
in England?

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d.knape

Sun 26th Jan 2020 01:46

yep. I agree.
customer surveys are actually an irritant.
hence the poem
next time they ask, send them this poem! haha

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Philipos

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 19:37

2025 - thanks for your profound words. Much appreciated. P.?

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d.knape

Mon 13th Jan 2020 03:19

who wants to hang around
with old people.
they smell and
don't make any sense.
I know this from what people tell me.
I would never admit to it myself.

wiink.

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d.knape

Fri 29th Nov 2019 00:53

giving is better than receiving
in the long run
what you acquire does not make you happy
what you give to others
does.

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Philipos

Tue 26th Nov 2019 19:10

JRJ and Bleeding time - thanks for commenting - there were a bunch of them around then who were so unforgettable. Pike, Sgt Wilson, Capt M. What mannerisms they all had. Cheers. P

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d.knape

Tue 12th Nov 2019 23:36

Lamp Post:
I try to keep things simple.
That way, even I
can understand my own poetry.
?

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Philipos

Tue 12th Nov 2019 20:44

Slotting it in - thank you so much for the like - what days they were eh? ?

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Philipos

Mon 11th Nov 2019 19:36

Hi MCN and thanks for commenting on Bus Ride Scenario - I guess the poor child unknowingly sussed it was an unpleasant word despite her ignorance of it's meaning - had it been said to her in joking way she would probably have laughed it off herself. I guess we all remember the unpleasant kids at school. ?

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d.knape

Sun 10th Nov 2019 01:49

so sorry to hear about your dad passing so early
in your life. how sad.

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Philipos

Tue 29th Oct 2019 10:42

Totally agree with you on Canned Flesh comments - so tragic all round - thanks for responding. P.

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Philipos

Fri 25th Oct 2019 11:57

Re; Brewing up - couldn't agree more M.C. There must a word out there that perfectly describes this mind boggling scenario - (something like conundrum). Will it ever come to a satisfactory conclusion for everyone. I think Writeoutloud helps us get it off our chest. I wonder if that word I might be thinking of could be 'Wrexit' or could even be 'Vexed it' Am sure someone will coin a suitable phrase one day. ?

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d.knape

Tue 22nd Oct 2019 23:07

good point about maps confusing women.

if only WOMEN came with instructions!

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d.knape

Wed 16th Oct 2019 00:18

Master of Ceremonies---
you got it right.
the poem is about the innocence of children
and how they express themselves.
thank you.

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Fred Nicholson

Sat 12th Oct 2019 17:09

Some may agree this subject, 'Color Matters'
is infuriating, frustrating and downright annoying.
These experiences are not ouchies, that first appear
in the body. These grouped emotions start up stairs
and may become headaches and body maladies.

I hear you loud and clear!
White Black Pink Ochre
Rough Dry Baggy Firm
skins don't matter to me,
and it's not about skin tone.
My tone is paper bag brown.
What do you name yours?

It's about generations of families
severed from their rich cultures,
deprived of their native languages,
and given Jesus Christ to worship.
400 years later we watch Wakanda
and munch on hot buttered popcorn.

It's about Native American Indians. STOP!
Think about that. They certainly are natives.
American because of Mr. Vespucius.
Indian because of a geographical error.
90% of them were killed purposefully,
some not, by folks wanting to own land.

Physical, emotional and spiritual abuse
starvation deprivation and outright murder
may have long lasting affects (or is it effects),
on someone's outcome. What do you think?

It's about feeling it in my bones,
not just reading or thinking about it.

'Color Matters' is not just about Indians and cowboys,
or Crayola hues. It's really about Black and White.
This is North America, where one(1) drop of African
blood makes you black. You ever hear such nonsense
where you live? This won't be found in current law books,
but it lives on, in the heads of many here in the U.S of A.

M.C. Newberry, I don't know your racial heritage
and do know the adage about birds of a feather.
It has been that way AND change is quickening.
Each successive generation is more tuned in.
Old farts like me still cling to the past,
and need to step aside.

So many young people connecting in/with/for life/communion/love awakening.

M.C. Newberry, I heartily thank you for the thought-full
response to my work and will respond to any and all other comments. I did not know what identifying name you'd prefer, so I used the name in front of me.

Blessings abound,
f

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Philipos

Mon 30th Sep 2019 18:40

Thanks MC - perhaps some of us should turn our guns on them via Greenpeace. I will try and work out how it goes. Blessings. P.

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d.knape

Fri 27th Sep 2019 04:43

it is a shame kids are not taught etiquette anymore.
or...adults for that matter.
Please & Thank You
thing of the past.

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d.knape

Tue 24th Sep 2019 10:00

thanks for reading "There Comes A Time".

a passing thought that passed.

Beware the one
who holds the scythe
he comes creeping in
in dark of night
Death may be certain
but of a different stripe
the worst of fears is
an angry wife!

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d.knape

Tue 17th Sep 2019 04:18

thank you M.C.
for your long interesting comment on my poem.
and I am glad you helped that pigeon.
we all need help sometimes,
wing and a prayer.

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d.knape

Mon 2nd Sep 2019 02:08

glad you made it through your youth
and your grandad dad.
so many burdens for you
and yet
here you are on WOL
your own good fortune.

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d.knape

Sat 31st Aug 2019 03:16

Toad in hole
will soon grow old
as he sits in sun
a "Whole Toad In One"

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Chrystel Roberts

Sat 24th Aug 2019 21:12


Many thanks for commenting on my poem “Sorry Is A Sorry Word".

I particularly like the last sentence of your comment!

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