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keith jeffries

Fri 28th Sep 2018 13:45

Daniel,
Thanks for getting back to me. I appreciate this. At present I am writing a series of articles on the Poetry of the Great War which you can find posted on the WOL Main Page. It has a Union Jack above them. Your work interests me. I would like to see more of it.
Thanks again
Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 7th Apr 2017 10:11

Hello Daniel, I am a relative newcomer to WOL and came across your profile and the poem The Place where only Dead Men Sleep. This particular poem interests me as I have written similarly in a poem called HellĀ“s Quagmire which is posted on my profile. We write not from experience as we are too young yet you have captivated the atmosphere so well of what life was like in the trenches. I drew a lot of my inspiration from old war time photos and some written works. Your poem has a special essence to it. Thank you. Keith

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Wendy

Fri 6th Nov 2015 14:47

Thankyou for your kind comments I'm sure Daniel there is a lots more thoughts coming my way Wendy

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Darren Lea-grime

Tue 28th Jul 2015 23:57

hi dan not seen you in a while, cheers for the comments on workers unite. it was meant to be a song, as my singing voice isnt up to much it became a poem....the cowards way out!!

cheers again daz

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Darren Lea-grime

Tue 28th Jul 2015 23:57

hi dan not seen you in a while, cheers for the comments on workers unite. it was meant to be a song, as my singing voice isnt up to much it became a poem....the cowards way out!!

cheers again daz

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Martin Elder

Sat 25th Jul 2015 19:13

Hi Daniel
Thanks for your comments on brighton beach much appreciated. They are memories for me of when summers seemed eternal and eternally hot. Now I am droning on like the boring old fart I warned my children I would become.
He he !
Cheers mate

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David Cooke

Sun 14th Jun 2015 10:18

Hi Daniel

Glad you liked my Mass poem!

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Fri 12th Jun 2015 08:46

Thanks dude,for being a very very nice man! x

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Ian Whiteley

Sat 20th Dec 2014 19:43

thanks for the kind comments on 'a wee dram' mate - here's a toast to you and yours for the festive season - hic ;-)

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Mon 15th Dec 2014 22:26

Hi Daniel.

Profuse apologies for not answering your kind appreciated comment on that diatribe of a war poem.

I sort of let it run away with me.

A very Merry Christmas to you. Ken

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Martin Elder

Wed 12th Nov 2014 17:27

Hi Daniel
Thanks for your comments on Do it again. I hadn't thought about performing it. sounds like s good idea. I will give it a go.

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Martin Elder

Fri 17th Oct 2014 23:36

Thanks for your comments on run boys run Daniel glad you enjoyed it. I see you been trying some performing. Go for it. I have tried a bit myself.I have found it difficult at first but will keep plugging away.

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 14th Oct 2014 19:30

thanks for the kind comments on 'blockhead' Daniel - I'm in catch up mode again - I'm bloody useless at keeping up to date - cheers mate

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Sun 12th Oct 2014 00:09

Hi Daniel

Thanks for your nice comment. If your ever in town on the night, come and join in with us at the Ringers

Ken

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 8th Oct 2014 12:33

Hello Daniel - I noted your comment on Harry O's
post "Sound Advice". You're welcome!
I plead guilty to a love of verse/rhyme and to
being a traditionalist in such matters. They
help the mind retain things that it enjoys...
thus contributing to its health. How can THAT
be bad?
The popular composer Jule Styne (famous for his
hit tunes) had a classical music background and
was once asked about it. No doubt thinking of
stuff that stays in the mind, he remarked
"You can't whistle Shostakovich".
Cheers.

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Steve Higgins

Wed 8th Oct 2014 00:37

Thanks for looking in on my page Daniel.Glad you liked the Mother poem,
Cheers, Steve

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Gus Jonsson

Tue 7th Oct 2014 15:21

Hi Daniel

Many thanks for picking up on my poetry and paintings,,,

I'm very touched by your comments and hope you are well and look forward to seeing you soon,

Regards Gus

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 1st Oct 2014 13:48

Daniel,
Thanks for the comment on Majesty...
There are a whole lot of comical memories I could recount about that street, but it would be too long on a poetry site. (I like your rhymed stuff) Hopefully, I will be able to get back to commenting anon.
...You`ve started me thinkin` again.

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 27th Sep 2014 13:42

DD ta for the observation on ''Train window''. Good points. Tommy

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David Cooke

Thu 25th Sep 2014 19:45

No way, Dylan. I was flattered!

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 22nd Sep 2014 19:22

bloody hell - missed your comment on 'Snipers' too - I'm hopeless lately - thanks again mate - appreciate you taking the time to comment and glad you liked it

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 22nd Sep 2014 19:18

Thanks for the kind comment on 'Gods Of War' Daniel - I know it was a while ago but been on holiday and had a very busy time since I got back - not even had time to get on WOL which is unusual for me - glad you liked it - still coming over to Tyldsley on Friday - will see you there if you are

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 20th Sep 2014 23:52

Cheers Daniel re 'Left Luggage' some good points made by yourself. I was unaware of to be sure. thanks :) Tommy

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Martin Elder

Tue 16th Sep 2014 23:19

Hi Daniel
Thanks for your comments on tall tales. I can remember many moons ago when there would always be somebody older and apparently wiser in the pub dispensing words of wisdom or tales of what they had or hadn't done. just hoping I haven't got there ....yet

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Preeti Sinha

Mon 15th Sep 2014 08:54

Daniel, thank you for reading and your kind comments. I have no idea what I would title my poems. Open to interpretation :)

Thanks again.

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jean lucy thompson

Sun 14th Sep 2014 22:27

thanx very much for your comments Daniel; and for taking the trouble to give them Was a bit unsure about this one I seem to be geared to one subject at the minute Hope I can get on a much happier note soon :) thanx again and for the welcome back

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garside

Tue 9th Sep 2014 20:39

thanks for reading and commenting Daniel

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Pete Slater

Mon 8th Sep 2014 21:26

Thank you for reading my offerings and taking the trouble to comment Daniel, it is really appreciated.

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Pete Slater

Thu 4th Sep 2014 09:28

Thanks Daniel for your comment on my offering "Multi Coloured Change" It is much appreciated. Always glad to get comments from fellow poets. Cheers.

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Andy N

Wed 27th Aug 2014 12:56

thanks for the comment over my Stefan Kiszko poem. Been a poem that has been dangling around in my head for years, daniel. delighted you enjoyed it. it's a case that should never be forgotten.

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David Cooke

Sun 24th Aug 2014 16:54

Thanks for kind comment on Northern Soul poem, Daniel.

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Martin Elder

Sat 23rd Aug 2014 19:52

Thank you so much Daniel for yours comments on 'Memory'
much appreciated

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 6th Aug 2014 22:52

thanks for the supportive comments on 'death of a poet' Daniel - getting towards the back end of the recording now - another couple of weeks and I need to start work on the small book I'm going to put out with the CD - still on track for early October I hope - I've reposted the poem with a music link - finished recording it today - hoping it is liked

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Martin Elder

Wed 6th Aug 2014 22:26

Thanks for that Daniel. your right I originally wrote it about a more modern conflict but your right it does seem to work well in anytime. I have written some poems around the first world war but they seem a bit trite and others have siad it so much better.
Thanks again
Martin

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Travis Brow

Wed 6th Aug 2014 06:27

Morning Daniel, i'm glad the gig went well. You must be gratfied to have been asked back. Good luck in all your endeavours.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th Aug 2014 13:21

Hello again Daniel - thanks for the comment on
"Foot In Mouth". I keep up with the "footie"
via my brother-in-law and sister who are avid
Arsenal fans (for their sins!).

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Travis Brow

Fri 1st Aug 2014 14:24

Hello Daniel, i've just seen part of your recent comment to Cynthia, noting your first poetry reading. How did it go?

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 29th Jul 2014 19:35

Thanks for the kind comments on 'Thor' Daniel - I'm in catch-up mode again ,s o you may hear from me again shortly
Ian

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Martin Elder

Fri 25th Jul 2014 23:00

Thanks Daniel for your comments on switched off
A part of me was reminded of Glenn Close in Fatal attraction when she sat in the apartment just switching the light on and off the whole time.

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jean lucy thompson

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 22:15

ty Daniel I actually wrote this basic poem many years ago ....... nothing changes does it :(

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:44

Thanks Daniel

Much appreciated. Been writing about babies a lot recently. (I used to be one you know)

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David Cooke

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:07

Hi Daniel Glad you liked the Miles poem. It's Jeanne MOreau on the album cover. Really atmospheric music with plenty of night time street scenes. All very cinema noir.

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Bel Blue

Thu 17th Jul 2014 00:01

Thank you Daniel, for taking the time to read and comment on my work. It is a poem about a traumatic loss, and the storms that pummelled the coastline. I spend as much time as I can on the coast, it is my biggest muse. :)ps I am not sure where I should comment back when there is a comment on a poem. Is this the done way. :)

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 16th Jul 2014 19:54

thanks for the comments on Craiglockhart Daniel - now recorded it as a very up tempo punky song - really suits those fast rhythm repeats - posted it to my FB page - cheers

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 15th Jul 2014 18:35

Cheers DD for your appraisal of 'Tour De France' I feel like I'm at the back each time I read it :/ Tommy

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Dominic James

Tue 15th Jul 2014 10:36

Hi Daniel
thanks for comments on thirst for light: I hadn't thought of the canal angle, but you're right, actually this one recalls a sunny day on the Hungerford section of the Kennet & Avon. all the best,
Dom.

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James Roper

Wed 9th Jul 2014 08:40

Thanks for the positive reinforcement Daniel; I think it is people like you that make something like this work.

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Martin Elder

Tue 8th Jul 2014 19:04

Thanks for that Daniel,
Yes I had forgotten about the combs dunked in what one can only presume to be some form of disinfectant.
As to the things that were only for the weekend, I can well remember when I had apparently reached adulthood a friend asking me to make purchases on his behalf, even though I didn't need a haircut !

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jean lucy thompson

Mon 7th Jul 2014 22:36

thanx Daniel; love all your poems like your style very much :)

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David Cooke

Thu 3rd Jul 2014 20:16

Hi Dan Glad that there's at least one afficionado out there to dig my jazz vignettes. I was mulling over this one at The Cleethorpes Jazz weekend. Charlie didn't make it - for obvious reasons! - but still a fgood time was had by all!

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