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Joe Williams

Thu 10th May 2018 10:03

Thanks Robert, glad you liked the poem!

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 9th May 2018 12:19

thanks you for commenting on 'this is the news' Wendy.
I'm pleased you liked it and appreciate you taking the time to comment
Ian

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Big Sal

Wed 9th May 2018 03:16

Great sample

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Tue 8th May 2018 20:18

Hi Hazel, thank you for your comment on my poem.
Much appreciated.

Hannah

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 7th May 2018 17:04

thanks for the kind comments on 'Daily Howl' mate - but where've ya been? I haven't written a political poem this year (yet) *wink*
Ian

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Big Sal

Sun 6th May 2018 22:33

Very nice sample.?

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 6th May 2018 20:23

Ray "Backwards glancing" nods in your direction. Tommy

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Damon Blackery

Sat 5th May 2018 23:10

Thank you both so much.?

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Ces

Sat 5th May 2018 21:37

Your comment is v much appreciated.. Keep coming with your bitter-sweet verses, they're gut-wrenching to read.

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Sat 5th May 2018 11:54

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Big Sal

Fri 4th May 2018 22:52

Killer samples. ?

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Damon Blackery

Fri 4th May 2018 20:38

I think you're my favorite poet on here now.

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Hasmukh Mehta

Fri 4th May 2018 06:39

they were lonely birds
but exchanged no words
it was their desire
but weren't admired

the world was strange
but they couldn't manage
they sang in loneliness
but brought joy to the face

how could they unite?
and force the passion to ignite
but they remain delighted
as and when the scene of love was sighted

there is joy in silence
and cash it on when getting the chance
love is a divine gift
so make no shift

enjoy and try to meet
love each other and affectionately greet
it may pay one day
when you will have your sway




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Hasmukh Mehta

Fri 4th May 2018 06:31

Love is like the flower
it needs kind showers
either from the rainy season
or from the kind person

love may blossom
and create room
for new things to emerge
and silently manage

love has no reason
to deny an access to the person
who is selflessly seeking a union
and offers to stay as the companion

give the way
and stay
as comfortable as you were before
you will never feel sore


it is a right moment
to present
your perspective
with an indicative gesture



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Wood

Thu 3rd May 2018 22:33

Hello

thank you for your visit.
joy.

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Tyler-Evolution

Thu 3rd May 2018 09:36

Thanx. All my tattoos represent battles won /lost in life x

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Thu 3rd May 2018 06:03

I admire your tenacity, however you sound confused about a person maybe u need to voice your feelings directly to that person without others interfering and maybe it's all a question of timing. If the other person isn't ready or hasn't been prepared to hear your voice, leave it up to the universe. MADELINE. AND my prayers are with u, with your career and general well being. X

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Xoanxo

Wed 2nd May 2018 17:54

Thank you Wood!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 2nd May 2018 12:18

Welcome from me, too. I'm looking forward to more poems also. But - be careful not to post too many at once, as the average WOLer probably won't keep up. One-two per week is your best bet - to receive best attention to your work from a wide range of readers.

Just my opinion, of course. Like Anya, I think WOL is splendid.

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Wood

Wed 2nd May 2018 03:50

you have the form that captures the audience.
thank you for sharing your work.



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Ian Whiteley

Tue 1st May 2018 12:26

thanks for commenting on 'pain killer' Keith - I appreciate your support and for taking the time to comment
Ian

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Laura Taylor

Tue 1st May 2018 11:28

Ooo did you? I'm in love with the west myself - heading back over in August, cannot WAIT. Dublin to Doolin then down to Kerry.

Peat fires are so damned HOT aren't they?! ? And the smell, mmm. Hey, I'd love to read the one you wrote for 'Scent Memories'. Perhaps PM it to me? Did you ever see the one I wrote about walking the Cliffs of Moher? I was out of my mind with panic that I'd hurl myself over the edge - it's a 'thing' for some people, and I try to avoid high places mostly, but this was so utterly heartbreakingly beautiful that I forced myself to do it. Amazing exhilarating experience, and I wrote one of my best poems ever afterwards.

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 1st May 2018 00:17

Hi Laura. I too love a turf fire. I worked on a farm in north west Ireland for a couple of summers in my teens, and in the farmhouse we cooked on a turf fire. I also worked in the bog, gathering the turf - hard work! I recently contributed to a "Scent Memories" project, and wrote a piece about the smell of the turf fire based on those summers.

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Mon 30th Apr 2018 20:10

Hi Ray thanks so much for your comment on my poem The New Love.
I look forward to reading more of yours.

Hannah

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Joe Williams

Mon 30th Apr 2018 15:20

Thanks Trevor, glad you liked 'Killing the Piano'. You're right about the digital stuff - there's nothing wrong with them (I've got a few keyboards lying around my flat!) but there's so much more to a real piano than that.

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keith jeffries

Mon 30th Apr 2018 10:55

Sofia,
Thank you for commenting favourably on my poem A Woman of Substance. It is much appreciated. Keith

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keith jeffries

Sun 29th Apr 2018 22:20

Hello Binte,
Thank you for commenting favourably on my poem. It is much appreciated.
Keith

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nathleighsha

Sat 28th Apr 2018 21:38

Thank you

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Nick

Sat 28th Apr 2018 18:42

I appreciate your comment and absolutely love your work. I will be following waiting for more.

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Underneath the Poetry

Sat 28th Apr 2018 14:00

'Submitting is not an option for within me is a fire set for destruction.' Powerful line. Thanks for sharing

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Big Sal

Sat 28th Apr 2018 13:50

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Fri 27th Apr 2018 00:18

Anthony Emmerson

Thu 15th Dec 2011 21:50

He would have approved Tommy. Probably the most honest thinker comedy's ever seen.

Regards,

A.E.

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Joe Williams

Thu 26th Apr 2018 10:00

Thanks for the comments on 'Killing the Piano' Ray, I'm glad you liked it. That one always strikes a chord (pun intended!) with people who play or who grew up with a piano around the house. It's one of those little tragedies of the modern world, I think.

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Joe Williams

Thu 26th Apr 2018 09:54

Thanks for the comment on 'Killing the Piano' Hugh, glad you liked it!

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Joe Williams

Wed 25th Apr 2018 21:24

Thanks Karin, I'm glad you liked the poem ? It's a true story, more or less.

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Joe Williams

Wed 25th Apr 2018 21:17

Thanks for commenting Keith, and I'm glad you liked the poem. It is sad to see a dying art, and I think a lot of people who might not even play can relate to the loss of a piano.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 25th Apr 2018 10:34

I can't believe you found my poem from eight years ago! And, yes, it was one I totally loved writing and sharing. At that time I belonged to a 'poetry club' that encouraged writing in all genres. We enjoyed robust discussion together which included criticism, suggestions and valued encouragement.

So thanks again. And welcome to WOL. It's a great site.

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Wendy

Wed 25th Apr 2018 05:09

A lovely poem very thoughtful and very true thank you Hasmukh Wendy x

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Hasmukh Mehta

Tue 24th Apr 2018 15:56

i am at face book too as hasmukh amathalal.i am poet and abt 20000 poems to my credit.

my link is www,poemhutner,com as hasmukh amathalal

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 24th Apr 2018 13:59

thanks for the comments on 'pub quiz theory' Ray - just one more piece of modern living that I've come to despie - in my day it used to be called cheating - now if it gets you gold you do it - rather than take your natural place in the world.
Ian ?

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 24th Apr 2018 13:58

thanks for the comments on 'ub quiz theory' Laura - yes, I'm bitter - because life seems to want to make things as easy as possible for folk these days - rather than test their true mettle - I know who and what I am - and I don't need google to answer for me
Ian ?

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keith jeffries

Tue 24th Apr 2018 09:15

Hello there. Thank you for your two poems. I have enjoyed the richness of both and look forward to seeing more of your work. Welcome to Write out Loud. Keith

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Karin Seaver

Mon 23rd Apr 2018 20:15

The poem you put as your sample is beautiful! Love it

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elPintor

Mon 23rd Apr 2018 04:06

Your writings have reminded me much of the heartbreaking headlines I've read and this movie that I saw...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=97Z54yo7l9g

I see that this is an issue close to you and I am glad to see such perspectives opened up to the world through a military man.

Rachel

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Big Sal

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 21:28

Powerful sample.

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Sun 22nd Apr 2018 18:20

Thank you so much for your comment Mike.

Hannah

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Chris Bainbridge

Sun 22nd Apr 2018 04:10

Thank you so much... I am sorry for not responding sooner, I am a newbie and still finding my way. And Frances, lovely to get an exile's view - I left the North East in 1967, aged eight! But it won't leave we alone...

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Sat 21st Apr 2018 05:09

Thank you, Chris for taking the time to read my words - for the likes and the comments.
I've thoroughly enjoyed 'Northumbria', it's knowing-ness and it's internal rhyme.
I was born in Blythe but left (with my parents) when I was 4 1/2 to go to Africa. Returned with my mum in the early 70's to see her old home but wished we hadn't as it was turned into 5 flats and the garden taken up by a huge intersection. So sad...

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Maggie Sawkins

Fri 20th Apr 2018 10:43

Hi Mike - I've organised Tongue&Grooves in Portsmouth since 2003 and would be up for your survey.

Maggie Sawkins
hookedonwords@gmail.com

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 19th Apr 2018 19:34

thnaks for the recent comments Tommy - hope you're keeping well
Ian

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