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jennifer Malden

Sun 1st Dec 2019 08:29

Hope this isn't a real problem. Anyway, imagining it is, you are'bigger' than your monster, so just get out and leave it at home!! Great writing.
Jennifer

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Hamzah Aslam

Sat 30th Nov 2019 13:16

Po and Vautaw. Thank you for the warm welcome.

Thank you for your kind words. Ive not been doing this for long but it's a great escape from reality..

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 30th Nov 2019 01:51

Welcome Hamzah! I can already see your gift of writing from the soul and have added you to my favorites. Write on!

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Lynn 7.

Fri 29th Nov 2019 13:34

You have a way with words, Eric! Thanks for sharing! ?

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d.knape

Fri 29th Nov 2019 00:53

giving is better than receiving
in the long run
what you acquire does not make you happy
what you give to others
does.

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Philipos

Tue 26th Nov 2019 19:10

JRJ and Bleeding time - thanks for commenting - there were a bunch of them around then who were so unforgettable. Pike, Sgt Wilson, Capt M. What mannerisms they all had. Cheers. P

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afishamongmany

Mon 25th Nov 2019 21:50

Thank you Po. I'm glad your getting something from my scribbling and keyboard tapping.
Not sure about your Baal Peor reference unless it's refering to the fact that we reap what we sow? But even with that there is grace, grace, amazing grace.
Go well
Yea keep our feet on the ground and our head in the clouds (depending of course on which clouds we mean).
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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sun 24th Nov 2019 20:13

p o r t r a i t

by Tommy Carroll
Wednesday 20th November 2019 9:52 pm

Cheers Ray

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d.knape

Sun 24th Nov 2019 13:38

looking back
Is difficult
looking forward
even harder.

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d.knape

Sat 23rd Nov 2019 11:55

I kept the piano
but what can i say
pianos need players
yet I don't know how to play.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 23rd Nov 2019 10:51

Welcome to WOL. No apologies ever necessary. We all write from the heart. Commenting really does make good friends.

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d.knape

Thu 21st Nov 2019 04:37

Thanks Tom for reading
"You left before I could say Goodbye"
i think it could apply to many situations
and many people.
Haven't we all expressed that sentiment
at some point in our lives?

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Philipos

Wed 20th Nov 2019 21:36

Don - re Junk Mail - the big difference with your system and ours is that we have to provide an A4 page and envelope - requesting opt out (back through the postal system) every 2 years. With 41,000 residential homes (not including business premises) occupied, in my area alone we are talking big numbers of felled trees nationally over a single generational lifetime - and that is before we even get to the question of the junk mail itself. I know of no other country that does this in the English speaking world - and where the post office ignores the householders request in writing (usually a sign) on the door. It is a total farce - even 3rd world countries are showing better recycling ummph than ours. Makes me so cross. ?

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John Marks

Wed 20th Nov 2019 19:46

sunset casts rainbow fractals
blurring our faces,

This is a poem as much about a recurring vision as it is about the struggles to love. 'Fractal' is such an apposite choice, trapped in a recurring pattern, wanting to break out into singularity, restrained by the heavy weight of romantic myth. "A fractal is a never-ending pattern. Fractals are infinitely complex patterns that are self-similar across different scales. They are created by repeating a simple process over and over in an ongoing feedback loop. Driven by recursion, fractals are images of dynamic systems – the pictures of Chaos."

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Tom

Sun 17th Nov 2019 10:30

Hi Jon, thanks for your comment on Crooked Café. Great to hear from you. I completely agree, friendly customer service in a one of a kind place is a rare thing in the big cities these days and it's to be treasured. I feel like we've got to support those local businesses and keep them going...

If only so we can sit there with our notepads stealing lines ?

Thanks again, T.

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d.knape

Sat 16th Nov 2019 03:19

follow your wife's advice-
you can't go wrong!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 15th Nov 2019 10:58

Six years like the passing of a breath.

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Philipos

Fri 15th Nov 2019 08:06

Interesting profile MT. Thanks for commenting on Coming a Croper. Blessings. P.

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Aimee

Fri 15th Nov 2019 05:51

Thank you !!!! I’m glad I’ve finally found a place full of creative thinkers

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Dewald

Fri 15th Nov 2019 04:11

Good work Aimee !! Good to know that are people of all ages seeing that the world has a lot a contradictions ?

I have posted an piece this morning called Who am I, sharing very much of the same emotion in your post

Love your work !

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Aimee

Fri 15th Nov 2019 00:18

Thank you I’ve been writing for 10 years but haven’t published yet never thought I was that good

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 22:40

Ray you are correct. I stand corrected. Correction is the side-street to drunken doorways.

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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 21:53

I don't know where you came from but i am sorry you had to
find my site and read my terrible poetry.
I hope someday you will recover.

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Eli

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:25

Greetings Graham.
Thank you for your comment for the piece, "Hands of Ankh".
There is no translation, as the poem was inspired through a dream, in a language I do not know. Sorry.
Since that time, there is someone I know who believes it it Swahili!?
Wow, and translated a few lines, but didn't have time to translate it entirely.
Thank you for your support.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli

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Eli

Thu 14th Nov 2019 16:20

Greetings Cynthia.
Apologies that I haven't referred to your comment sent, Wed 7th Aug 2013 12:15! Oh dear. It was for the :Hands of Ankh". I wrote this piece after a dream in a language unknown to me. Thank you for your sensitive comment.
Much appreciated.
Love & Light.
OL. Eli

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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:22

Liked your poem
thought it was neat,
don't step on your
Blue- toed feet!
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d.knape

Thu 14th Nov 2019 10:15

thanks for reading "Dear Valued Customer"
i hope you had as much fun reading it
as I had writing it.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Thu 14th Nov 2019 05:18

Welcome Aimee! I love your poetry already and look forward to reading more!

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d.knape

Tue 12th Nov 2019 23:36

Lamp Post:
I try to keep things simple.
That way, even I
can understand my own poetry.
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Philipos

Tue 12th Nov 2019 20:44

Slotting it in - thank you so much for the like - what days they were eh? ?

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Tom

Tue 12th Nov 2019 10:20

Hi Dave, I just re-read your sample poems again and they're all absolutely excellent. I hope you're well. T

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Philipos

Mon 11th Nov 2019 19:36

Hi MCN and thanks for commenting on Bus Ride Scenario - I guess the poor child unknowingly sussed it was an unpleasant word despite her ignorance of it's meaning - had it been said to her in joking way she would probably have laughed it off herself. I guess we all remember the unpleasant kids at school. ?

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Tom

Mon 11th Nov 2019 17:11

While I await
a dryness of shoe
here I'll give
my praise to you
a versatile poet
and a good chap too
my sock dye's run
now my feet are blue!

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d.knape

Mon 11th Nov 2019 15:11

by now
those sneakers
must be soaked
do you have another pair
and dry socks?

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d.knape

Mon 11th Nov 2019 15:09

Thanks Tom
for reading
"through 7 year old eyes"
my cousin's dad
heart attack.

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Philipos

Mon 11th Nov 2019 12:12

Hi Martin, Bus Ride Scenario - I think mum just put a finger to her lips and said hush. Too good not to write about though. Thanks for noticing. P. ?

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d.knape

Sun 10th Nov 2019 01:49

so sorry to hear about your dad passing so early
in your life. how sad.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 9th Nov 2019 17:27

Indeed Ray indeed.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 6th Nov 2019 11:28

Mr. Mabuya, are you still with us? As passionate as ever?

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Santianna O

Mon 4th Nov 2019 16:07

I love your page and poems ? I new here trying to reach out to others. ?

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Becky Who

Mon 4th Nov 2019 15:07

Thanks for commenting"Sorry for apologising", I really appreciate it. About the cosmetics - I get that too! They keep bunging me anti-aging samples for tired eyes!

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Becky Who

Mon 4th Nov 2019 15:05

Thanks for commenting "sorry for apologising", I really appreciate it.

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<Deleted User> (22444)

Mon 4th Nov 2019 03:41

Hi D, thanks for your comments on Naked. Glad you thought it authentic but I have been happily married for 20 years and it's all fiction! Was inspired by a friend's relationship breakdown, but poetic license was liberally applied.

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Becky Who

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 15:52

Hi Mark, thanks for commenting on "sorry for apologising". I haven't been on WOL much recently either, but I felt like trying to share my latest video. Your comment made it worthwhile!

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d.knape

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 11:36

read "Fifteen"
excellent!
very poignant
how often men remember
the first girl that caught their eye
so young so innocent
so lasting in the heart.

I see one person said it was good to have you back
even if you did not post anything.
Maybe that's the secret for us all.
The less we post the more we are admired.
wink.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 2nd Nov 2019 19:52

I’m good thank you and thanks for asking. I hope you’ve had a chance to look at my blog where I post my work.

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d.knape

Sat 2nd Nov 2019 12:16

how are things in the forest?

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d.knape

Fri 1st Nov 2019 19:54

maybe bald heads are contributing to Global Warming.
there seems to be more of both!
haha

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Thu 31st Oct 2019 23:45

John - the words which Graham refers to, which you posted on his profile (16 Oct), I recognise as my words to him on his return to WOL after a break.

No need to apologise John...I actually feel quite flattered that you went back eight months to find the quote.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 30th Oct 2019 17:02

"The grindstone that wears a man into a polished version of himself."

Excellent Ray.

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