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Chris Dawson

Mon 7th Jun 2010 01:03

Hi Josh,
noticed your question to Darren - there are so many people on here who are very experienced performance poets - some of the best around, go and see as many of them as you are able - and don't be shy about getting up there yourself.
There is a monthly column about performing in 'Features' - written though by an actor who doesn't perform poetry! (no nerve for my own words)
Good luck.
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Joshua Coates

Mon 7th Jun 2010 00:41

Hmmm, long time since you've posted but oh well. Saw you do a poem at the poetry pillow on friday and thought you were very good. That is all =]

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Sun 6th Jun 2010 23:34

Hi - I mean to send you this before your email, but sent it to myself instead....durr.
Hi - Isobel - I agree that the chemistry has to be there - if it's not, then it's just not & you are wasting your time. I think internet dating etc can work if you're prepared to give it a go, play safe & look out for nutters & (for girls) the "quick shag brigade" - it worked for me - but you have to decide what works for you.
Chris - you are sooooo right! As long as the chemistry is there and you LIKE this person, you can work on the other stuff - none of us is perfect & to expect that is going to end in disappoinment. Also - dont give up on them at the first major hurdle; try & hang on in there - just staying together counts for a LOT - it's as if the more you give, the more you get back. And both have to be able to say sorry. I've known several other girls in my life who (had I been a bit more mature) might have been "the one". X

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Sun 6th Jun 2010 18:36

Hi Tom, thanks for your uplifting comment!

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darren thomas

Sun 6th Jun 2010 17:50

Hi Josh - if people think you're 'really sarcastic' then you're well on your way to becoming a writer of considerable worth.

There is a WOL at Bolton as Win has rightly stated - it was where I first ventured into the world of performance poetry before I was covered in meaningless accolades and non-existant awards. It's an ideal night on which to cut your (first?) teeth. Fill ya' boots and enjoy WOL to its full potential.

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Deborah Jordan Bailey

Sun 6th Jun 2010 12:48

Hi Dave, sorry for the long delay in responding, I have been away for a while, thank you so much for your kind comment on Oyster. : ) Deb

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Chris Dawson

Sun 6th Jun 2010 10:55

Woops = just realised that I posted this on Banksy's profile - meant to post it on yours :)

Butting in on a private conversation here - hope that's ok. I think, for women in particular, we're led to believe that there is a 'someone' out there who is the 'right one', and all we've got to do is find him, prove that the glass slipper fits, and then hang on like grim death.
There's no 'right one', there's merely a choice of compromises to be made.
One of my favourite authors - Ann Tyler wrote in her novel 'A Patchwork Planet' (and I'm para-phrasing) ... after so many years to-gether, the other person sort of becomes the right person.
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Sun 6th Jun 2010 10:30

Hi - do you want another 2 cents??
most of what you say I agree with -I was in the same position that all the "sane" girls are already married etc. But if you perceive yourself as a Strong woman, dont you think that that can easily come across as "bolshie" & put off the "nice guys"? You've set yourself a prettty tall bar there -you're looking for "very special" -aren't we all? I'd be tempted to go for someone you fancy who treats you right & work on the rest later, as most women can twist their man round their little finger anyway & mould them to their needs (me included). sorry if it sounds like a lecture, but I'm just talking sincerely from my own experiences. X

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Sun 6th Jun 2010 08:28

my problem is that sometimes I make what are (to me) obvious jokes & people think I'm being serious ! It's the same with those defences of yours (and a lot of girls are the same BTW) - if you come across too "hard" you might put off the guys you want to reach & only the cocky idiots have a thick enough skin to take your banter - and they might not be what you're looking for. Only my 2 cents - it's not gospel, just my opinion as having "been there" myself quite a bit.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Sun 6th Jun 2010 04:09

Its great to see rhyming poetry from the far side of Europe!

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Sun 6th Jun 2010 04:05

Hello from a fellow Irish poet!

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Joshua Coates

Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:48

Hi, it's josh from poetry pillow the other night. Thank you for being so warm and welcoming for a first timer.
Shall be seeing you at the next freed up! =D

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:24

BTW - bitter & twisted = I WAS only joking !!

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:21

I'd pray for you to win the lottery too - only I'm not much of a believer. I don't know how I got to be so lucky this time round, but I'll keep my fingers crossed for you. I think that first you have to believe that such a thing (love) IS possible after all. X

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:14

Hi Lynn - "pearls" - many thanks for the very kind comments. B

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:13

Hi Alison - "pearls" - many thanks for the very kind comments.
If you want a really good cry, what about Anthony Emmerson's "Visiting Neil" ? B

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 23:11

Hi Ann - "pearls" - many thanks for the very kind comments. B

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 22:30

Good evening Lynn.Hope the naughty poem was,nt too strong for you.And thanks,yes I am recovered from horrendous traffic jam-fortunately no one was hurt.Many thanks for all your comments tonight.Have a super holiday-that goes for the rest of the family too.Don,t forget to pack plenty of paper and pens(or quills depending on your age-joking!)will miss you-all have a safe flight and plenty of rest-do not try any Shirley Valenting! unless its a poet millionaire-lol! lots of love to all the family-Stefan-x oops! nearly forgot to answer your other comments-grandkids...thank God for them all..soooo funny and cute.They do keep you feeling young as well(or is that just while the pocket and present money lasts out!lol!)as for first attempt at painting in watercolours-When you come back off hols,remind me to make an exhibition of myself for you-lol! but you must promise not to laugh.And I promise the same of your attempts.Cheers chuck-Stefan-x

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Joshua Coates

Sat 5th Jun 2010 21:49

Your wish is my command!

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Sat 5th Jun 2010 18:47

Hi, Isobel! Thank you for your nice comments on my jokes. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Chris Dawson

Sat 5th Jun 2010 18:09

Thanks Isobel, left a fuller comment on the poem.
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Chris Dawson

Sat 5th Jun 2010 18:07

Left a comment back on my poem :)
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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Sat 5th Jun 2010 15:24

Thank you Ann, both for comments and for sharing your poem

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shoeless

Sat 5th Jun 2010 14:43

hello ann , thankyou for reading and commenting on my peg poem :) my sister collects vintage laundry tackle and displays it at farmers events , so she was really chuffed with the poem :)

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 5th Jun 2010 13:23

Come on Josh! How about another blog? xx

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 11:49

Thank you for comment on my "Play". Yes, i think aloud/allowed definitely would occur to people when the poem would be allowed to be read aloud :-)

I think a lot about poems how they look on paper and when they are being read and all these alliterations that make one's thought drift in certain direction.

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Sat 5th Jun 2010 10:11

Ann! Thank you for your comment on "Child". I was just looking at a small child another day and thought that i'd be annoyed if people stare at me, even lovingly, when i sleep.

I like your "Pink"! It's about pain, but pain small, curable and self-inflicted, so it's quite comfortable to read, although of course u feel sorry for poor burnt person :-)Unfortunately it was about yesterday's weather - and now - back to normal! X

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 5th Jun 2010 09:06

My poem on a similar theme

Gone

It’s gone now.
That gentle all-forgiving love,
the love that just accepted,
never saw the changes
as we melt softly into age.

A hand to hold
when walking down the slippery hill.
Shoulder to cry on.
Voice on the telephone.
Just gone.

I’d rather stay alone
than fight on,
than try to catch
another pair of eyes.
No eyes as gentle-kind
as yours.
No others to see me
and to know
the me that no others
ever see.

If you were here
you’d pass the tissues now.
Make me a coffee,
cheer me up.
Perhaps you’re giving me
some little bit of strength
to carry on.
Thanks for that darling
but I’d rather have you near.


The hand I thought
would hold mine
until deaths quiet call
has gone.



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kath hewitt

Sat 5th Jun 2010 09:00

Just looked now, didn't realise you meant today!! When i had looked on the net for the definition, one was 'a collector', i took that context.
urgh! such a confuddled morning today!! xx

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kath hewitt

Sat 5th Jun 2010 08:57

Hi Ann, i honestly haven't seen that, i had written the word down months ago but wasn't able to do anything wqith it. I go back to my notepad sometimes and just sort of look at the words i have noted down and see what happens. Reaverman came from that x

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 5th Jun 2010 08:43

Hi Kath - did you see Chris Dawson's explanation of the word reave, she put it on Rachel Bonds page. Also a good word cos it makes your think of the grim reaper. He sounds like a character in a horror film! x

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 5th Jun 2010 07:39

Yeh Isobel - our crayon chewer was Gwyn Price! Why on earth do I remember that! Maybe if we'd eaten crayons or stuffed them up our noses we'd be remembered for all time too.

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Francine

Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:43

Thank you Alison for reading and commenting on 'C'est la vie...'
I found it to be quite an interesting challenge.

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Francine

Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:32

Salut toi !
Eh bien tu vois...
Tu m'as inspiré d'écrire un poème aujourd'hui ; )
Merci beaucoup pour les beaux mots...

xxx

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kath hewitt

Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:21

Hi Isobel
Thank you for your generous comments on my Jackie challenge. I think i kinda like being distinctive enough to be recognized lol
thanks again x

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 23:16

Good evening lovely Lady-don,t worry-bloggingtons has,nt turned into blockingtons-just that I spent most of today being an obligatory link in a very long chain of traffic on the A55-heading to my daughters house in Abergele,North Wales.As a consequence my preference is for a long soak in't tub! especially after running round the garden after the grandkids-been a lovely day nevertheless-catch you soon haiku-ing! lol! thanks-Stefan-x

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 18:28

Hello Lovely! Wowee as always!10 into 5 is simply cillalelululiah! It sweeps like vitamins through the system and comes out glossy. xxx

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 18:24

Hello Jane, just caught up with your wonderful coffee soaked milkman and wild winds a-blowing in the discussions!I've been 'off-site' and missed your marvellous, joyous imaginings when your put them up!Apologies! Blame it on my erratic freelance worklife.I sometimes only visit for a few minutes (as a treat) then it's back to keeping the proverbial wolf from the door. I've been absent for quite a bit till v.recently.You've made me giggle like a true giggler! xx

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Isobel

Fri 4th Jun 2010 14:30

Thanks for your comment on my latest Larisa - it was a fun exercise with a bit of a serious under belly.
Isobel x

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Daniel Hooks

Fri 4th Jun 2010 13:34

hi there josh we met at poetica poetry night in manchester it was good to meet you should post up the poem you read there about humanities Dark psyhe I thought that was a really good poem

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:28

Good morning Larisa-you are very kind to have read and commented on my poem'The way of many'I am enjoying reading all your poems with all the lovely pictures!-its very nice to have you blogging on here-many thanks again-Stefan-x

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:23

Good morning Lynn.My gratitude to you for commenting on'The way of many'and as I mentioned previously,I like your change of poetry style-really good!enjoy your day Lynn.Thank you-Stefan-x

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Fri 4th Jun 2010 09:22

HI Andy


Thank you for your comments on my tiny poems :-). U r too kind, but it definitely inspires me to write more X

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Dave Bradley

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 23:32

Hi Ann. Thanks for commenting. Hope you understand if I don't always say thank you. The WOLosphere could get awfully clogged up. That survey of yours sounds really interesting. More power to ya!

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 20:15

I'm from St-Petersburg (left for UK 10 years ago ) :-)

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 20:01

Thanx for your comment to "Play". Spasibo i priyatno poznakomit'sya! :-)

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 19:41

Hola Anthony ;-) re TC it was an afterthought for me too the 'Top Cat' thing ha ha I used to love that show .......
TC........ Officer dibble..... ;-))

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Thu 3rd Jun 2010 18:23

Hello Joyous, Magnanimous & Glorious Poet! Thank you for your very generous comment on my biog. Life is one dickens of a doozy, ain't it?! Merry hours and funny days to you :) PS. I love the new photo. What are you staring at in the distance? xxx

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 13:41

See how drunk I get 2moro after work first, Isobel.. If I get very drunk - I may just arrive and perform in a drunken, wild manner.. Not much change from norm I know!! lol x

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Andy N

Thu 3rd Jun 2010 13:39

Hi Kath;

Just the Mary Bell case itself - not a case I know tons about that's all, chick. Yours is the sort of piece that is I need to read up on a bit before I can really offer a comment...

I do like the piece from what little I know... The structure is very clever and disturbing..

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