Hi Tom, many thanks for your kind comments on my German Boy poem.
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Thank you so much for your comment on my Josie poem - I think she is a heroine for our times!
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Hi Jean, many thanks for you comments on my recent poems. Very much appreciated. TB
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Thu 26th Aug 2010 13:10
HI Cynthia! Thank you for commenting my poem! Hope to see more of you on one of Manchester poetry readings! X
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Hi, Dave! Thank you so much for reading my poems "Ballad about the Soldier" and "The Victory Day". Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments.
With warmest wishes, Larisa
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Thanks Ann. The view from the hill, stretching back nearly 40 years
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Thanks for commenting Ann. I hope you enjoyed the shepherds pie
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 23:07
Hi - many thanks.
all the best. B
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Tomas, thank you for your kind comments on Melancholium, much appreciated.
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 22:00
Hi Dave-many thanks for comments on 'T'inking' poem.-Stef.
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Hello Bernadette, you asked about Haiku.
The true answer would probably take a couple of pages to describe it in its purest form, but on the whole, here in the UK it is taken to mean a three line poem with five syllables in the first and third lines and seven in the second. The lines should relate to each other in some way, as Dave's does quite well. Hope this helps
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Hi Bernie, thank you for lovely comments on "Jimmy". Re the pictures, I started to google "images for" followed by the subject, and searched for something I liked the look of. Where there's a will.... lol. Love, Lynn xx
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Yes ty Bernadette; for your comments on Was This the Plan I agree sometimes I do feel its all planned out ahead for us grrr x
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Ty Ann for your comments on Was This the Plan Yes maybe we are as you understand so well Love to you too x
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Thank you so much dear Larisa for your lovely comments on "Jimmy". Love, Lynn xx
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Thanks Andy for taking the time to comment on my poem Magic Fields :) Much appreciated
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 18:55
Yeah-folks have said I'm a little psycho (amongst other things) :)
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 18:52
for comments on "no time for love" B
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 18:43
Hi, Cynthia! Please, come back to my poems
"His Majesty Accident" and "I Learn And Study English'. With warmest wishes and hugs, Larisa
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Glad you liked Walking the Shore. It was about a former colleaque who I was drinking with last night, as it happens. Glad to report he's in the best of health! Commiserations about the rejection, by the way. I had a sheaf of returned poems waiting on the mat for me when I got back from my hols the other day. Ain't it always the way?!
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Hi, dear Ann! Please, go to my poem "I Learn And Study English". Thank you very much for your comment. With love and hugs, Larisa
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Love the profile pic. Windswept power. Keep up the poetry variations.
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Hi Lynn, thanks for your kind comments on my Pearlfishers poem. And I definately think you should write the "female idea of heaven" poem!! Somewhere where chocolate is very slimming, wine is free and men are always nice and polite!! (No, that would NEVER happen - not even in heaven!) xx
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Hi Cynthia - thanks for kind comments on Pearlfishers. I agree with you re the un-needed words and have made a couple of cuts. And, did you remember where you read that article on Emily Dickinson? ;-)
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Wow thanks Thermo! Glad you think I look sexy in my new profile photo - Stef just said I looked drunk!! xx
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Hi Ann..NO MORE DECORATING LOL...it would be nice to read some published poetry but i wouldnt know where to start and wouldnt want to feel different about my own as i suppose it feels safe in my own comfort zone,but i guess i should read and learn. i have bought a childrens poetry book for my grandson ben,s birthday . he will be 7 in a couple of weeks and he has just read a roald dhall book from start to finish.his reading has become so good over the last few months and he likes poetry and how it rhymes so cant wait to give him his book ! i will enjoy reading it myself .. well ive got to start somewhere i guess lol. i still think that your work is brill! so be confident !! lv bernie xx ps. like your new profile pic x
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Wed 25th Aug 2010 14:54
Yes I am still breathing ha ha not been here much of late though, I managed to get out of my Ferris wheel in August to go to the Wigan slam, it was really great, amazing poetry, party atmosphere ha ha got a stonking hangover from drinking an evil brew called 'Pendle Witch' lol still I guess it was worth it, I hope you are well love the new picci you look sexy ;-)) Luv TC XX
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Hi again Bernie! I always felt it was enough to let the poems flow out, then let them be. Just recently I've started reading more poetry. It can get quite depressing sometimes when you read wonderful stuff, but then you get inspired (hopefully!) I do think I "overwrite", put too much info in, lead the reader into what to think and how to interpret the poem. I do want to try and leave more for the reader to do. We're all learning, after all! But I feel (typical gemini!) like too poets split down the middle at the moment! Take care - done any more decorating lately? ;-) xxxx
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Hi Bernie - thanks for kind comments here and there. I loved your Alphabet Lover poem. lots of love Ann xx
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Hi Lynn its nice to hear about all your grandchildren. stef also mentioned his grandchildren so between us we have a large brood !lol xx
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Wow Bernadette, three grandsons and another on the way! My daughter was like that, having three girls in a row, but now she has evened it up a bit with two boys. We thought she'd finished after the first boy, but no...! They are all marvellous though of course, and we have 6 grandkids altogether, our other daughter has just one girl.
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Hi Dave, Sorry to hear about the impending funeral you are attending, hope all goes as well as possible. No hurry with collaboration from my point of view, just if and whenever you feel ready. Best Wishes, Lynn x
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Hi Lynn - well now there's a thought - I guess it was evident that I was really meaning the poem wasn't overly long in my view as Cynthia had first indicated. However if you are up for collaborative efforts I can be swayed that way :) Can this be in a couple of days or so? We have a funeral to attend tomorrow so family and friends are arriving from all corners, but I should be clear by Friday. Best wishes, Dave
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Hi Greg - yes, it was Daljit Nagra and another poet called Frances Leviston, both were wonderful tutors who gave their time really generously. But . . . I now find I can't write! And I know that if I work on my poems and make them more minimal and less wordy, no one on here will like them! May not be around so much on here in future, til I've sorted the conundrum out! xx
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Hi Ann. Was your poetic guide Daljit Nagra, who wrote Look! We are Coming to Dover? I'm a great admirer. Or have I got the wrong end of the stick yet again, and it was a different Daljit? Sounds like a good course, anyway
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Thanks for your comments on my poems - you are such a great supporter and reader of poetry on here - WOL is lucky to have you. Both the poems were fast writes - I have to be feeling angry or miserable to write like that so thankfully, I don't do many. Normally I agonise over poetry and there is tons of stuff I don't post. Good to see you at Salford - hope to have more time to chat next time - there's always too much poetry at these things LOL x
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Just wrote a really long comment which didn't update - how annoying is that? Will post this to see if it is working.
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Hi Isobel Thanks for the comment on Chemo & glad you liked it. It's about my father-in-law. He certainly is a character and seems pleased that I've now made him world famous by putting him on the net!
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Tue 24th Aug 2010 07:45
Thank you so much Cynthia for your encouraging and helpul comments, I really appreciate every single word you wrote.
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Goooooood morning bazzing (very nice)Lady-the chat prob is my fault not yours-whence sorted,yea verily wilst I letteth thee knoweth-until then dear 'eart-adieu! in other words-terrar-Mr Wildechops-xx(B-xx)
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Hi Tomas thank you for your lovely comment on my blog ..as yet untitled..i really must put a title on this one...i lived in fife scotland near dumfermline for 32 yrs and my son and daughter are both scottish. my son lives in ireland with his irish wife and my daughter and myself live in manchester where i originate from.. Best wishes..Bernadette
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Once more reading your grandma poem makes me smile :-)
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Another rhyming poet like myself! Bravo!
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"As yet Untitled" is a lovely rhyming poem.
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The rat race of humanity is an emotional Desert indeed as showed in your poem "Desert".
Throw an eye over some of my stuff when you get the chance...
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Mon 23rd Aug 2010 22:23
Hi - I just could not find any poems in the others - they were still almost unbelievable for me & I wrote at the time, of one of them, that it actually seemed to be more real than real life & that one is really capable of logical thought processes within a dream - just like in real life, only here you can do whatever you like. That was the tragedy of this dream - that I could have asked any question & been given the answer (hence the title) but I couldn't think of a single thing to ask - what a waste. all the best. B
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Thank you so much cynthia on your kind comments on my..alphabet lover.. im so glad you liked it . and thank you for your comment regarding the ooh la la 's and wondering if it was a child or an adult . i re-read it and can see what you mean by it could be either but never realised this when i wrote it...it is actually an adult but could equally be a child so i guess i did better than i realised on this one ! best regards bernadette x x
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thank you for your comment on my ..alphabet lover.. glad you enjoyed it..best wishes bernadette
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Thu 26th Aug 2010 20:49
thanks for the comments on rowan tree, i liked it when i wrote it laid on my back in a wood :)
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