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chris yates

Tue 19th Oct 2010 12:09

Hello Sean thank you for all your hard work this weekend it was much appreciated "rise from your trenches building piece by piece and bit by bit" love that line xx

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Chris Dawson

Tue 19th Oct 2010 11:33

Hi Chris,
Lovely to meet you and John at Hebden, hope you enjoyed it.
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Chris Dawson

Tue 19th Oct 2010 11:28

Hi Cynthia
Was lovely to meet you at last, hope you enjoyed the weekend - I did - would like another one now!
Forgot to say too - Happy Birthday!
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Chris Dawson

Tue 19th Oct 2010 11:22

Hi Ann,
Was great to meet you at last, hope you had a good time, a safe journey back and so on. It was lovely of you to come all that way and I hope you found it worth while. I don't make it to that many WOL events myself, but I hope to see you at future events.
Keep in touch
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winston plowes

Tue 19th Oct 2010 00:11

Thankyou Steven for running your experimental poetry workshop at the big weekend. Very informative, opened a door (or rather) opened a door wider than had already been opened... so thankyou very much. Great to chat over the weekend in Hebden. Winston

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Louise Fazackerley

Mon 18th Oct 2010 22:43

what a cracking clutch of poems you have. birth of my boy- what a title! what a poem!. gushing a bit now. i liked them.

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 20:22

Hi Rachel just caught yours too! Really well delivered. Enjoyed them a lot.

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Rachel McGladdery

Mon 18th Oct 2010 20:02

Fab stuff David....right back atcha :)
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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:41

Dear John as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:39

Dear Kealan as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:38

Dear Dave as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:36

Dear Andy as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:35

Dear Winston as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:34

Dear Isobel as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:33

Dear Cate as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:32

Dear Ann as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:31

Dear Rachel as you've been kind enough to leave positive comments about my poems I thought you might like to check out this link to some poems of mine on You Tube, at least it will increase my count from single figures!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pa5DFRyKC60&feature=related

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David Cooke

Mon 18th Oct 2010 19:16

Hi Greg - Trying to catch up with poems on the site. I've just read and enjoyed Tomboy and the Paperbacks poem. AS usual lively and very skilful. As for the sestina - Wow, but I'll have to have a few reads before I get to the bottom of that one! It's a real tour de force.

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Mon 18th Oct 2010 17:55

Hi Laura - I think that's a lovely story, & yet again, synchronicity must be at work here, cos - like I said - I heard the Exact same phrase used on TV - and whenever I see/hear/read something unusual like that I always squirrel it away to think about later - and it was such an odd phrase - yet something that you could imagine any of us doing at one time or another. all the best. B

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Sat 16th Oct 2010 16:59

Thank you so much Cynthia for your wonderful crtique of 'The knot Within'...you are very kind


Many many thanks once again.


Augusta xx

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Paul F Blackburn

Sat 16th Oct 2010 06:35

Hi Dave, thanks for your comment on my poem 'Freedom'. I hope I do win because I'm a penniless, crippled orphan who has been cruelly treated by this wicked world and could do with a bit of joy in my life - but don't let this influence you in your voting.

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Paul F Blackburn

Sat 16th Oct 2010 06:31

Hi Gus,
Hope you are well, haven't seen you for a bit, hope you are well and thriving.

Thanks for commenting on my poem 'Freedom' though your original comment threw me as I didn't know what a 'urist' was - a dwarf? I enjoyed your 'Plate and spoon' poem and your picture for Augusta's poem too.

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Fri 15th Oct 2010 17:42

thank you, Gus

btw, lovely, down to earth poem about a vain plate!

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Isobel

Fri 15th Oct 2010 17:12

Yes - I see where you are going with that cigarette analogy Gus. If I apply that logic to the malodorous dish, what the dishwasher upper really wants is to be free of the onerous task of washing up. Crack that habit, learn to eat with one's fingers and life would be a little simpler. A communal eating pot is what my family needs (a saucepan maybe) along with more simplified table manners. I've always enjoyed eating with my fingers - vastly underutilsed implements in the western world... But then I guess, the fingers might start to rebel and then what?

Forgive my rabbiting - just like thinking aloud in a silly kind of way.

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:27

Good afternoon Andy

It seems to me that FREEDOM is a catalyst of circumstance, for example the cigarette crying for freedom is at once set ablaze and is extinguished humiliatingly into the stench of the ash tray who in turn cries out to be set free from its foul labour.

Of course not one of them realising that the cigarette smoker desires to cease his or hers odorous habit and be set free ….and so on.

By the way still waiting for your poem..??

Once again many thanks
Gus

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Ray Miller

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:26

Elaine. Thanks for your comments on Genealogy.

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:25

Good afternoon Isobel
Thank you so much for your comments you are very kind and just a little whimsical yerself at times... Mmmmm

It seems to me that FREEDOM is a catalyst of circumstance, for example the cigarette crying for freedom is at once set ablaze and is extinguished humiliatingly into the stench of the ash tray who in turn cries out to be set free from its foul labour.

Of course not one of them realising that the cigarette smoker desires to cease his or hers odorous habit and be set free ….and so on.

Once again many thanks

Gusxxx

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:22

Good afternoon Cynthia

Thank you so much for your comments you are very kind.

It seems to me that FREEDOM is a catalyst of circumstance, for example the cigarette crying for freedom is at once set ablaze and is extinguished humiliatingly into the stench of the ash tray who in turn cries out to be set free from its foul labour.

Of course not one of them realising that the cigarette smoker desires to cease his or hers odorous habit and be set free ….and so on.

Once again many thanks
Gusxx

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:21

Good afternoon Dave

Thank you so much for your comments you are very kind.

It seems to me that FREEDOM is a catalyst of circumstance, for example the cigarette crying for freedom is at once set ablaze and is extinguished humiliatingly into the stench of the ash tray who in turn cries out to be set free from its foul labour.

Of course not one of them realising that the cigarette smoker desires to cease his or hers odorous habit and be set free ….and so on.

Once again many thanks
Gus

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Gus Jonsson

Fri 15th Oct 2010 16:19

Good afternoon Ann

Thank you so much for your comments you are very kind.

It seems to me that FREEDOM is a catalyst of circumstance, for example the cigarette crying for freedom is at once set ablaze and is extinguished humiliatingly into the stench of the ash tray who in turn cries out to be set free from its foul labour.

Of course not one of them realising that the cigarette smoker desires to cease his or hers odorous habit and be set free ….and so on.

Once again many thanks
Gus xx

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Laura Taylor

Fri 15th Oct 2010 15:51

Thanks for your comment on Called You Babe, Winston - am glad you enjoyed it :) Did put this comment on my blog, but not sure if you saw it or not.

Have you heard that album at all? It's actually my favourite album, ever, and I speak as a lifetime music anorak who has never once been able to say for certain which album is my actual favourite (or even my top 20 favourites!) :D Well worth a listen or 50. Jeff Mangum's a genius, imo.

Anyhoo, it played a major role in this love story, and continues to do so :)

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 14th Oct 2010 19:33

Oh well! That's technology for you! xxxx

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Lynn Dye

Thu 14th Oct 2010 19:31

Hi Ann, don't know why, but for some reason I can't get the chat to work! :-( xx

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 14th Oct 2010 19:19

Ta Cynthia, but I most definately do not resemble a model! I wish!! But you might just find out this weekend! xx

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:48

Thanks for your comment on my Freedom poem.

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:47

Re Winging It! I think I saw them as doves because of the pure whitness, the quietness, the round eggshellness of them, and the peace element, as they seem a peaceful way to make energy. Hope that helps, Cynthia. Gulls are so noisy!

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:46

Thanks for your comment on my Freedom poem. Yes, I thought it was funny that he didn't scald his mouth, perhaps he did. And though you suggest that I punched him in the mouth, I couldn't possibly comment.

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:44

Thanks for your comment on my Freedom poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'm now considering changing my name to James Shelley - lol.

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:43

Thanks for your comment on my Freedom poem. Where the ideas come from I've no idea - I woke up with most of this one in my head this morning - so maybe elves popped in,in the night and crafted it just for me.

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Paul F Blackburn

Thu 14th Oct 2010 18:41

Thanks for your comment on my Freedom poem.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 14th Oct 2010 09:32

Morning Freda

Ah - Louise Bourgeois isn't actually a poet, but she IS an artist, and has used text within her work. She's best known for her sculptures - a lot of her work revolves around births, wombs, maternal subjects, trauma...which is (I think) why I saw similarities with you (plus I notice you wrote for Spare Rib - wow! Louise was a feminist, and worked for LGBT causes too). She only really gained widespread recognition in her 80s. If you can get hold of the documentary on her, do. She worked right up to her death, aged 98. She is hugely inspirational to me :)

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Freda Davis

Wed 13th Oct 2010 22:49

I like your sad little plate. Obviously similar desire to mine, to see the world.

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Freda Davis

Wed 13th Oct 2010 22:48

Thanks for your comment Gus. I was for a while travelling the highways by thumb, as I had neither car nor money and needed to be off and roaming. Much more sensible now, sadly.

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Freda Davis

Wed 13th Oct 2010 22:38

Hello Laura, and thank you for your comment on my Tree of Life poems. I think the second part is stronger than the first. I don't know this poet you mention, but I will look her up.I like the irony in your Freedom poem.

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winston plowes

Wed 13th Oct 2010 18:51

Hi Laura, thanks for your pylon comments! another fan! Win x

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 13th Oct 2010 18:13

Wouldn't the rescue of the Chilean miners be a fab subject for the Freedom poem? Not really up my street, hope someone tackles it! x

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kath hewitt

Wed 13th Oct 2010 16:38

Hi Isobel
Thanks for commenting, nice to know it's been read lol x

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chris yates

Wed 13th Oct 2010 13:31

thank you for your kind comment on "service users" and glad to know I'm not the only one comes home to breakfast pots in the sink love your work it flows really well looking forward to seeingyou at the weekend x

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kath hewitt

Wed 13th Oct 2010 11:31

hi, thought i may as well give it a go, though i 'm not convinced i'm a good enough writer for stuff like this lol cheers for the head s up x

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Andy N

Wed 13th Oct 2010 10:37

Hi Kath - have a read and if interested - let me know...

http://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=16744

(I don't want to start forcing people into this as the choice is yours) x

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