Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Sat 11th Oct 2014 19:36
Hi Anthony.
Having now read your paradise poem. (lovely piece) t
Together with mine,both give the impression ones final years are not much fun.
On the contrary performing the last act myself I find the general demeanor to be one of cheerful optimism, right up until the inevitable, despite varying levels of physical discomfort.
Not a long tear soaked episode in anticipation of an agonizing end.
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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Sat 11th Oct 2014 18:11
Hi Anthony
Thanks for that very kind comment, it's always nice to get endorsements from, someone of your standing
Ken.
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Hi Laura. I'm really happy you enjoyed my poem. The truth is that I make these things up. Depending on what issue I'm writing on I try to get into someone else's mind and shoes. Words just come out and really try to feel what could be felt. Thank you for your comments.
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Dear Susan, thank you. I was moved by your kind words. Please consider that you have a new friend in Venezuela. My best to you.
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Carrie you might already have noticed that when someone posted several poems in one go only the last one posted stays live on the blog listing, the other go to your archives. The problem with this is only the latest one tends to get seen. Just a thought!
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 8th Oct 2014 15:33
fabgear samples Joe.
Welcome and keep on rolling-as in poetry
not the *other*-haha!.xx
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Hello Daniel - I noted your comment on Harry O's
post "Sound Advice". You're welcome!
I plead guilty to a love of verse/rhyme and to
being a traditionalist in such matters. They
help the mind retain things that it enjoys...
thus contributing to its health. How can THAT
be bad?
The popular composer Jule Styne (famous for his
hit tunes) had a classical music background and
was once asked about it. No doubt thinking of
stuff that stays in the mind, he remarked
"You can't whistle Shostakovich".
Cheers.
Comment is about Daniel Dwyran (poet profile)
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Thanks for looking in on my page Daniel.Glad you liked the Mother poem,
Cheers, Steve
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Hello Rashmi
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Hello Ro,
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Natalie thank you for reaching out and sharing your vulnerability. Your work is wonderful.
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Hello Izo
Thank you for reading a commenting... yes a little on the dark side...but that's just the way I am these days.
However I hear every thing in your garden is rosy and long may it continue.
I hope you are well and look forward to seeing you soon.
Regards Gus xx
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Hi Daniel
Many thanks for picking up on my poetry and paintings,,,
I'm very touched by your comments and hope you are well and look forward to seeing you soon,
Regards Gus
Comment is about Daniel Dwyran (poet profile)
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Thanx as usual for your kind words Andy.
The painting is as you are most probably aware one of my own...and approaching poetry in a similar fashion is very much something I try to accomplish.
Once again many thanks for commenting, I hope you are well and hope to see you soon.
Regards Gus
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<Deleted User> (5011)
Tue 7th Oct 2014 05:04
HI Dave
Good to see you at the workshop last night, and to see your work here. Did you discuss The Masque of Anarchy with Ms Peake when you were with her?
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re ''In bits'' like Barney at Mo's? Tommy
'Barney is a character in 'The Simpsons' and 'Mo's' is a bar.
You have mail.
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Hello Admin,
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I love the way your sample piece tumbles over itself: trying to listen as the self-observant stuff worries us, despite ourselves. Whether reporting a romance or just, trying to listen, the poem has a good hold on that fractured quality that can invade our thoughts, this mania. I think it is a very good poem.
Dom.
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thank you for the welcome. i am glad that i have a place to write something n get a feedback on it.
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I thought I posted you before- Kassandra-.
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Enjoy enjoy! write and be dammed. Tommy
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Comment is about Megan Scoble (poet profile)
Original item by Megan Scoble
Daniel,
Thanks for the comment on Majesty...
There are a whole lot of comical memories I could recount about that street, but it would be too long on a poetry site. (I like your rhymed stuff) Hopefully, I will be able to get back to commenting anon.
...You`ve started me thinkin` again.
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Preeti Sinha
Tue 30th Sep 2014 10:30
Some of your poems have pics of pretty women attached. So I asked :) I think a foto would add to the poignancy of the poem.
Preeti
Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)
Original item by Tommy Carroll
Thank you Cathy - I only really wrote it for her eyes, and when she didn't get to see it, I didn't know what else to do with it.
Comment is about CathyLCrabb (poet profile)
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Cheers Dave for your appreciation of my comment. ;)
Comment is about David Cooke (poet profile)
Original item by David Cooke
DD ta for the observation on ''Train window''. Good points. Tommy
Comment is about Daniel Dwyran (poet profile)
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Thanks Steve
I couldn't think of a title, too upset.
Comment is about stephen smith (poet profile)
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Ray - I don't want your suggestions. She was dying while I was writing this, and died before it was finished. Out of all the poems I have written since you've been off the boards you chose this one to comment on? It hasn't got a title because I'm too fucking heartbroken to think of one.
I'll hold back on what I really want to say to you but congratulations on winning 'the most tactless twat' award.
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Preeti Sinha
Fri 26th Sep 2014 20:18
Thank you for your comment :)
Preeti
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Preeti Sinha
Fri 26th Sep 2014 13:54
Thanks Andy for your lovely comments :)
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Ged the Poet
Sat 11th Oct 2014 20:31
Anthony. Thank you very much for your very kind words on 'Another Grey Day'. There is indeed a lot to be said for the 'Rockfords' ;)
I like to think we all have a touch of the Peter Pan syndrome within us.
I would also like to say that 'Visiting Neil' is such a wonderful and moving piece of work.
Sincerely.
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