YOU ARE THE MUSIC - revised (currently being recorded)

A personal "take" on a show song.

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You are the music in my heart

With each beat I feel a part

Of some romantic symphony

Written just for you and me

 

You are the prelude that brings joy

The magic touch that you employ

Never ever out of tune

And never will I be immune

 

And so I see - it's you and me

Meant to be in harmony

 

You are the melody in my mind

And with each note I seem to find

New meaning to this life I live

New ways to love - new ways to give

 

You are the song I've made my own

The theme for every dream I've known

As sweet as any sung by birds

But they will  never know the words

 

So say you see - it's you and me

Forever in close harmony

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◄ DAYS OF WHINE AND POSES

LIFE TODAY ►

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd Jan 2020 18:15

Lovely sentiment, MC. I look forward to the recording.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 20th Jan 2020 15:51

Po - from a lyricist's point of view (or "lyrist" as Ira Gershwin might
describe the term), the sequence is A/A/B - A/A/B.
The arrangement is the business of (literally) the music arranger.
Variety can be found in many songs according to the style employed.
Cheers.
MC

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poemagraphic

Sun 19th Jan 2020 22:07

Is this in 4:4 ?

What tempo is it.
What Key

So many of us here are song writers if only we knew it!

I intend to record much more this year as poetry is always better to hear than read, I feel.

Great lyrics M.C
Po

M.C. Hmm! MC yourself go on you know you want to.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 19th Jan 2020 16:25

Mika, Don and Vautaw - many thanks for taking the trouble to comment.
Also - many thanks are due for the "likes".
It's always rewarding to know that pleasure has been given via the
written word.

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Vautaw

Sat 18th Jan 2020 23:45

Beautiful poem M.C. I would love to hear it in song❣️

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Don Matthews

Sat 18th Jan 2020 21:50

I liked the two-line 'intermission' and ending.....

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Mika

Sat 18th Jan 2020 18:03

Beautiful ❤️

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