Last Car

 

Looking for a new car

a new used car that is

the wife says

make it a good one

at your age

it's the last car you'll ever buy

 

I give her a worried look

what did she mean by that?

am I that close?

 

I have not been to the doctor for years

I have not been hospitalized

so what is she implying

I don't even want to think about it

 

maybe she's thinking

that the new guy

would like a nice car

 

I'll just stay over here

and keep quiet

 

the words

"this may be your last car"

still ringing in my head.

 

 

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Don Matthews

Sat 5th Oct 2019 00:17

Going once....

Going twice.....

Sold - to Rose....😎

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Rose Casserley

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:25

very entertaining dude!










Rose 💋

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Hugh

Fri 4th Oct 2019 16:02

A little bit of flirt

She was slim and smart with plenty of charm,
Chatty and friendly confident and calm.
She'd come to see me to plant a seed,
By the end of the meeting I was her dog on a lead.

She crossed her legs and was a bit of a flirt,
She did it with her eyes and a very short skirt.
She signed me up for my last car,
No swear words or smoke from a cigar.
No footie talk or offer of a drink,
A little bit of flirt was her success I think.

But it wasn't my last car,I put it into reverse,
Crashed into a bus,ended up in a hearse.
I'm up there in heaven happy and proud .
Driving with the angels up in the clouds.

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Oct 2019 15:15

What am I bid for the last comment? A lot of interest in this piece today folks....😋

Going once

Going twice ?......

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Oct 2019 15:09

dk in a driverless ?
Dearie dearie me
He still will need instructions
Where it's battery be

I've heard dk you buy them
From same instructions shop
Make sure they match your model
Or driverless stay stop

I'm full of great suggestions
(But Thalia thinks I'm nuts)
I'll have you still know dk that
I'm true, no ifs or buts

I don't like driverlesses Ruth. They mow down Skippys...😎



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keith jeffries

Fri 4th Oct 2019 14:45

Check the kitchen for sharp implements and hide them. When she gives you a coffee insist she tries it first and refuse to wear ties or scarves. Then you should be ok for the time being.
Keith

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 4th Oct 2019 14:34

It'll just be the last car YOU drive d.knape because next one you buy will be a driverless car! 😉

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Oct 2019 14:25

Just bought meself my first car
From sales shop did arrive
But salesman didn't think to give
Instructions how to drive

Do I buy instructions at another shop Hugh?...

No pressure dk. You enjoy last car/bus while still able....😎

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Hugh

Fri 4th Oct 2019 13:56

Your next poem should be "My first car,"I look forward to it as a car dealer.I really enjoyed reading this one as I have heard the term soo many times.Thank you

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Don Matthews

Fri 4th Oct 2019 13:33

"This might be you last car"
Sounds bit ominous
Maybe you'd worry not so much
By riding in bus...😎.

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Tom

Fri 4th Oct 2019 13:03

Haha, this really tickled me. Love it.

d.knape

Fri 4th Oct 2019 13:01


the older you get
the more likely you won't be
getting much older.

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