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Maui on my mind

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A little farewell to a package holiday company


A paradise trip

I was trying 

To find

A place

Like Maui

Was on 

My mind

Beautiful beaches

Rolling waves


Mr Cook

Took the


I'd saved





◄ Blind Date

Compare Despair ►


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Don Matthews

Thu 26th Sep 2019 03:23

Captain Cook could not find treasure
In time to pay the bank
We think we are in charge all times
But banks hold yank, can sank

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 25th Sep 2019 21:28

Do.To.Thy , Don and Nigel
All on this Island together
Making up
Bonkers riddles
Whilst searching
For Pirate's Treasure!

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Nigel Astell

Wed 25th Sep 2019 15:25

Captain Cook set sail
and on an island
far far away
lies his beloved treasure.

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Don Matthews

Wed 25th Sep 2019 13:17

Ruth he went and took mine too
So much for my hollie
Like you I'd be on Maui too
Instead I'm shit, not jollie ?

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