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Moral Abyss

Meet me in the 

moral abyss, 

the interwebs

of eternal bliss,

where we will 

confirm our love 

with a virtual kiss. 



◄ Twisted Love

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Mon 13th May 2019 01:54

Thank you Martin. ?

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Mon 13th May 2019 01:54

You mean a nun Ray? That would definitely add a twist!

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Martin Elder

Sun 12th May 2019 23:11


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Sun 12th May 2019 22:32

HI Vautaw. I can imagine an additional field of play here if you included a theme of the Abbess as well as the Abyss. That would body out the spiritual commitment such a person might experience. Thought provoking in any case!


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Sun 12th May 2019 01:06

Thanks Jane & Jason! It’s one of those poems that doesn’t feel quite done, but I’m not sure what to add. Thanks for the virtual flowers Jason! ?

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Sat 11th May 2019 23:57

Lovely sentiment! "the inter webs of eternal bliss"....great line?

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 11th May 2019 23:01

Nice poem, I'll send some virtual flowers.?

J. x

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