Moral Abyss
Meet me in the
moral abyss,
the interwebs
of eternal bliss,
where we will
confirm our love
with a virtual kiss.
Comments
You mean a nun Ray? That would definitely add a twist!
beautiful
HI Vautaw. I can imagine an additional field of play here if you included a theme of the Abbess as well as the Abyss. That would body out the spiritual commitment such a person might experience. Thought provoking in any case!
Ray
Thanks Jane & Jason! It’s one of those poems that doesn’t feel quite done, but I’m not sure what to add. Thanks for the virtual flowers Jason! ?
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Sat 11th May 2019 23:57
Lovely sentiment! "the inter webs of eternal bliss"....great line?
Nice poem, I'll send some virtual flowers.?
J. x
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Mon 13th May 2019 01:54
Thank you Martin. ?