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Lotto

Each day my feet walk along the grey pats, in the direction of the local shops.

I approach the same lady and purchase my ticket.

Some days its choosen and others " ill pick it.

Hoping tonights the night that I win it...

Praying to god with a bargaining ple and not realising my luck starts with me.

For I want it and see it ' yet, Im struggling to believe it. 

Wrong attitude " if I want to achieve it. 

Calming the mind I think it trew, now im certain I will win !! and when that day comes you will be happy too because money will never make me forget you....

◄ Devils domain

Poor me ' poor you ' poor us ►

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lisa donohoe

Mon 14th Jan 2019 12:17

Am cash ' not a rap just a little poem.. Now you have put a thought into my mind and I will look forward to seeing if I could stretch my self as far as a lyric writer.. I may just spit a few verses for fun ha ha... Thank you

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lisa donohoe

Mon 14th Jan 2019 12:14

Thank you martin' may it bring you just as much hope as me ?

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lisa donohoe

Mon 14th Jan 2019 12:14

Big sal ' it is indeed.. Plan of action for planting ones seed... Ha ha?

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Martin Elder

Sun 13th Jan 2019 23:08

This is definitely a poem to be read aloud.
Nice one

Big Sal

Sun 13th Jan 2019 22:42

Spoken with intention.?

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AM Cash

Sun 13th Jan 2019 19:06

Hi would be interesting to hear you say this. Is it a rap ?

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