Hearts and flowers and shit

(Valentines poem 2010)


A saying someone told to me,

these days when even love is tough,

“if you love somebody, set them free...” –

give them a false sense of security

then when they come back to you,

tie them up and ,

like,

do stuff.

You know, like...

stuff.

romance

◄ Dogmatism

Smashed fragments huddled for warmth ►

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winston plowes

Thu 4th Feb 2010 10:45

A look at Valentines day from a strange angle this Dermot. Looks different doesnt it. Not for traditionalists but strangely interesting. Win

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Rachel McGladdery

Thu 4th Feb 2010 10:44

I don't often do txt spk but sometimes only PMSL will do!I loved this!
Rach
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DG

Sun 31st Jan 2010 15:39

Bedpost is the term I generally prefer to tie myself to in that regard.

<Deleted User> (7164)

Sun 31st Jan 2010 13:26

This made me laugh.
That one line ''give them a false sense of security'' changes the whole theme of romantic love to one of possessive love or dominatrix, whichever term you prefer to tie yourself to. :-)

Janet.x

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Val Cook

Sat 30th Jan 2010 20:47

A poem in true Dermot style. XX

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Louise Coulson

Sat 30th Jan 2010 19:36

Ahh Dermot you shouldn't have, no really Dermot hahahaha

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Francine

Sat 30th Jan 2010 14:49

Cela me fait imaginer plein de choses aussi Isobel...
Mais tu sais, c'est peut-être un secret ; )

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Isobel

Sat 30th Jan 2010 13:51

Like what??? Will you be reading this shit out at the Tudor Dermot? I'm looking forward to your take on the valentine theme - it promises to be entertaining and very different to what I will be reading...

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Francine

Sat 30th Jan 2010 03:12

This definitely made me laugh DG : )

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