What Ifs And Maybes


What ifs and maybes

get lots of abuse

if we don't commit

there is nothing to lose

and maybe just maybe

we can't even choose

what ifs and maybes

are just an excuse.




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Sat 15th Dec 2018 05:44

I fully concur with M.C.

I am going to be super sensitive now when I get no comments lol

D. I love your little aside.

I am not keen when the comments don't have anything to do with or reflect the poem in question.

We all self defecate... errr. could be the wrong word!


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M.C. Newberry

Sat 15th Dec 2018 00:56

Simple and stimulating. Taking it further...
"Imagine" and "Supposing"
Are also worth proposing. ?
As for commenting - sometimes, the work in
question does not resonate sufficiently or can have some similarity to an entry from another source - or, is so full of conceit, it's
just not worth the effort without seeming to]
be argumentative or worse!

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 14th Dec 2018 22:07

Last two lines sum it up D.K. could be they are just excuses, on occasion..?

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Fri 14th Dec 2018 15:59

I always feel sad when I see


No comments posted yet.

what if, nope
maybe, nope
Look here, there is NO bloody excuse!

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Short and sweet... VERY sweet!


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