Romantic Desire

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even though we're more certain we'll meet
but there is still anxious confusion
my longing is mounting in my heart
can't wait to count the ticking time

the interwoven words unravel the taste
you remind me I'll be disappointed
but my answer to you remains the same
I love you just the way you are

I've prepared a truly heart
but there was always pounding
I want to be the best for you
and then we have to be one will
why should we worry about the turmoil

God always guides the hearts' steps
start to braid our endless true love
hope to feel such a romantic date
will strengthen our erotic desire
until only white hearts are involved

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Solo-Indonesia, 27th November, 2018, 8:36 am
Suko Waspodo
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Suko Waspodo

Sun 9th Dec 2018 03:01

Such a nice appreciation, Ghazala. Thanks.?

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Sat 8th Dec 2018 08:43

even though we're more certain we'll meet
but there is still anxious confusion
my longing is mounting in my heart
can't wait to count the ticking time

i can feel the anxiousness....phew!! why it happens to true lovers all the time...fake love is so easy, but true love has to bear patiently...?

another great work...hats off!!

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Suko Waspodo

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 23:36

Thanks Big Sal, for your appreciation

Big Sal

Sun 2nd Dec 2018 15:01

Very unique take on a love poem.

Well done on this.?

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