Trick or eat

Amelia lived in Sabden and was a witch,

In school she was unpopular and called a bitch.

This troubled her very much,

Her class mates were cruel and out of touch.


But belonging to a witch family was not so bad,

Her mum was a witch and so was her dad.

Her dad would drive to school safely  in the back seat,

Her mum while at work could make her house neat.


There was always magic in the air,

It was an extreme advantage to be fair.

Amelia did her homework without fuss,

It was done in one minute on the school bus.


Magic was all around her at school,

But her class mates called her a fool.

Halloween came round it was trick or treat,

A shock her school mates were to meet.


They knocked on the door of a haunted looking house,

The door opened and out came a mouse.

The mouse invited them all in for a treat.

But when inside terror they were to meet.


The house was full of wolves gnawing their teeth,

They were approached by a demon who's name was Heath.

He ordered the wolves to devour each kid,

But something amazing happened and they never did.


Amelia took control of the situation and twitched her nose,

Each wolf turned into a statue and immediately froze.

Her school mates were amazed and Amelia became a hero,

Taunting and bullying Amelia from then , turned to zero.


She had  saved their lives and was no longer a fool,

And became the most popular girl in the school.




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Chickened out by Amelia the young witch ►


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Wed 31st Oct 2018 13:43

Happy Halloween from Amelia the young witch from Sabden

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 30th Oct 2018 23:24

At least we never feel conned
When Hugh waves his magic wand!?

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:27

A curious tale indeed Hugh, whetting our appetites for kids to come knocking uninvited at our doors. Harry Potter watch out!


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Hannah Collins

Tue 30th Oct 2018 21:09

Bravo. Fantastic story. Love it.


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Tom Doolan

Tue 30th Oct 2018 14:53

A tale of the unexpected. wicked work Hugh. T:)

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Don Matthews

Tue 30th Oct 2018 13:38

A dad who drives the car in the back seat! Amazing!?

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Tue 30th Oct 2018 09:07

Amelia twitched her nose and changed the demon's name to Heath from Keith.Your absolutely amazing Amelia.What next?Tee hee.

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Don Matthews

Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:58

No way was Keith a demon. Tina might have been a bit of a girl, but not Keith. ?

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Brian Maryon

Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:46 it can't be, can it?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Tue 30th Oct 2018 08:38

Love this for so many reasons Hugh, great fun, great ending. A real fairy tale woven with skill..❤

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