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Drama

I have been asked to write a poem pertaining to soap..my contribution..a bit of fun.

 

Drama


Sitting cosy in the evening in my armchair,
I can never help it, but at the TV I do stare.
I feel I am addicted to my favourite soap,
that if I do not get my fix how will I ever cope.

 

My favourite character has just been killed off,
I think he's buried in the garden underneath a trough.
Cheryl's just gone missing with Suzie's husband John.
The private detective, is trying to find out where they've gone.

 

The adverts signal much manic activity,
quick let's get some biccies and a cup of tea.
Shhhh its back on...arms waving fingers to lips,
husband throwing out sarcastic quips.

 

Trudi's had her baby they have named him Paul.
They do say his dad's not Jack they think that it's Saul.
The scene cuts to a courtroom,
atmosphere oppressive all doom.
Camera zooms into the foreman of the jury,
swinging back to the defendant eyes wide and wild.
How will he manage if he loses his child?


Credits start to roll before the verdict is delivered.


I cannot help reflecting how much is in the plot,
and wonder how they fit it into..a thirty minute slot.

 

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

 

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 11:30

loved it but hey TC! come on! get those fingers typing again! ?




? for Noodles!



Rose ?

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lynn hahn

Fri 28th Sep 2018 06:53

That's great. Dove soap it is not lol. You made me chuckle thanks!

<Deleted User> (18118)

Mon 17th Sep 2018 18:12

Soaps, where we the viewers always seem to know more than the characters.
The daddy is never really the daddy.
Love this poem.

Hannah

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Rick Varden

Mon 17th Sep 2018 10:44

Great to read your lovely rhyming poetry. The world of soapland is pretty surreal, however we went on the new Corrie tour at Media City on Saturday and loved it!
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raypool

Sun 16th Sep 2018 22:37

A goody, Taylor - with its palms up on the table hiding nothing. I must say as an aside, that I get a bit cheesed off with the shortening of phrases into soundbites like Soaps, Celebs, Unis instead of Universities, making everyday things seem automatically over intimate. Sorry out there, but I am with the phrase police.

I'll get my coat.

Ray

<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 15th Sep 2018 20:33

My mother and I use to love to watch soaps and try to guess who was going to be "killed off next" or who was "cheating with who" great fun...good memories. ??

Big Sal

Sat 15th Sep 2018 19:14

When I was a kid, I used to watch 'The Golden Girls' with my mom. She never liked cartoons or anything I enjoyed, so we would sit and watch that for kicks. As I grew older, I grew more accustomed to shows like 'The Sopranos' and still find so much to love - even if it isn't a soap opera.

I used to have a friend that was into the telenovelas, and would watch those with his mom. Sometimes shows like these keep a little bit of sanity in a crazy world, but more importantly give us a chance to spend time with our parents while there's still time to.?

Have a good one Taylor, enjoy the rest of your weekend.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 15th Sep 2018 16:47

There is skill involved in spinning out these story lines like interweaving threads enacted by acting ability to keep the viewer watching - that much can't be denied. But I feel they
are primarily aimed at the female viewer; a view endorsed
by the reactions of a sister and a niece who love them - and
who have control of the remote!

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Don Matthews

Sat 15th Sep 2018 13:00

Sounds I'm missing a lot ?

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Trevor Alexander

Sat 15th Sep 2018 12:18

Has anyone done a 'man bites dog' storyline yet? Like Rose, I avoid 'soaps' like the plague. I did start watching a new programme some years ago, but when it started turning soapy, I stopped watching. And yet, they're so popular. Go figure! Your scenario is played out in a multitude of living rooms on a daily basis. I wonder if they could do a soap about watching and keeping abreast of all the soaps?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 15th Sep 2018 10:56

Just a bit of fun Rose ..... We all need a bit of that now and again.

Have a great day...?

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 15th Sep 2018 10:14

Hi Taylor, it's amazing how long soaps like Corrie and Eastenders have been going and how popular they are.

I have a preference for nature and historical prog's but like anything it all boils down to choice.

Nevertheless I enjoyed the poem.

cheers chuck!


Rose ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 15th Sep 2018 09:31

We are the same Brian but it is boring at times...

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 15th Sep 2018 09:21

The scripwriters surely must be running out of storylines soon mustn't they?

We only watch Corrie now...and that's looking more and more past its shelf life.

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