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The Old Vanity Case

The Old Vanity Case


She stood and watched the tram dissapear,
a young child whose body was now rigid with fear.


Every week she went off to ballet on the tram,
with a half a crown, which she got from her mam.


They had practiced today for their latest show.
What she would do now she did not know,
as she watched the tram departing easy and slow.


For on a seat alone on that tram,
her vanity case sits forlorn and forgotten. 
Leaving that poor child feeling frightened and rotten.


Slowly she trudges her way back home.
The old cobbled street feels hard on her tired feet,
but that day she did not notice, when her mother she did meet.


The first thing mother notices are her empty hands,
"Where is your vanity case?"her mother demands.
She points into the distance and sees the tram disappear,
before she suddenly receives a hard slap on her rear.


She was never to go to ballet again.
With tear stained cheeks she sits at her bedroom window,
and wonders who it was, who took her place in that show.


© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

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Comments

Big Sal

Sat 8th Sep 2018 16:03

Like the feeling of attending the first day of school and never wanting to be there.

It's hard for kids to come to terms with a failure, but sometimes even harder for the parent to reconcile their expectations and temper them with reality.

You really know how to play the emotions in a piece like a mandolin don't ya Taylor?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 8th Sep 2018 15:54

We can forget how such things can leave a lasting mark on
a young life. Evocative and touching.

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Hugh

Sat 8th Sep 2018 14:13

A moving poem

The tears in our eyes sadly drain,
As the vanity case moves away on the train.

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Don Matthews

Sat 8th Sep 2018 11:38

Sad ? (I was tempted to put a sad face. But that just 'aint me)

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