Distrust is a bad trait

Performing an intrusion


                     Could damage the illusion


                                           Leading to the forgone conclusion


                                                                                   That I might just lose you.

anxietybad pastcheating exDont betray trust or trust shall betray youlesson learned young and never to learn againlet old paranoia restlovesee no evilSnooper no snooping

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HayzTee (Hayley)

Sun 22nd Jul 2018 13:54

Awww thankyou Don ? this one came to my mind suddenly one day so means a lot

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Don Matthews

Fri 22nd Jun 2018 01:02

I like this Hayley. The way you have positioned the lines (dwell on each before moving on to next). Intrusion/conclusion/illusion perfect end-rhymes. Although 'lose you' is different it carries on the 'oose' sound. I like it. Well done.

Don ?

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