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Brought Low

Brought Low

 

Melancholia has carried me to 

a place where I am quiescent beneath

a vault of overbearing cloud

where above the bridge of light

continues to drive the outer world

I lie in obscurity with no glimmer

of enthusiasm or hope only a sense

of fruitless endeavours for the

mind to ponder on

Shipwrecked on rocks of despair

crushed by waves and changing tides

Quite alone I reach out but feel nothing

no one to touch or hold

naught to stimulate a dormant soul

not a shred or shard is of value

Inert I wait for the bridegroom

who will gather me up and

transform my heart and fulfil all my yearnings

◄ Withdrawl

Destitute ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (18118)

Wed 20th Jun 2018 17:37

Heartfelt, from a lonely place.

Hannah

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 18th Jun 2018 23:35

Bear in mind there's only one "ism" worth our time and
that's optimism! But melancholy is a trait not unknown in
the Brit (or more specifically English) mentality and has
its place in our lives. Chin-chin!

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 18th Jun 2018 23:09

Phew Keith!

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keith jeffries

Mon 18th Jun 2018 23:07

Brian,
Fear not as I am quite and well and perky. I often reflect on my moods and try to recall them and commit then to paper. I try to grasp the essence of the moment, if that makes any sense. Thanks for you concerned comment.
Keith

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 18th Jun 2018 20:57

My God Keith...is this you? Come on mate, you're a long time dead. Make something happen, don't sit back.

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