I wonder of 100,
How much of you I've seen,
I've seen your 2 or 10 percent,
As you have seen of me.
I wonder if you'll trust me,
With 10 percent more you,
Say 20 percent total,
Ill give the same to you.
I wonder if my percent me
would be safe with you,
No reassurance? Give it back!
Lets keep it back at 2.
I'm not sure about the contradiction that asks how much then states "2 or 10 percent" being seen. I think this
could be revised accordingly...e.g.
I wonder of 100
How much of you I see
Is it 2 or 10 percent...
The same you see of me?
Sorry, that's the songwriter in me!!
But the premise is both inventive
and entertaining.
I liked this Donovan. Very cleverly thought out. Nice to see another rhymer on the site ?
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donovan wilson
Tue 11th Sep 2018 09:58
Thankyou for the comments guys ?