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The fashion today’s

For Free Verse, I’d say

But I find the discipline neater

To write poetry

Accentually;

The soul of the work is The Metre.

 

I’m not autocratic

Nor even dogmatic

And occasionally I might complete a

Piece without form,

Which isn’t my norm,

But then I return to The Metre.

 

Sometimes there’s a price

For being precise

You’ll need, now and then, to delete a

Great word that won’t scan,

Like Abraham’s lamb,

A sacrifice made to The Metre.

 

And relevant rhymes

I agree will, sometimes,

Embellish and make the line sweeter

But the essence for me

Of all poetry’s

The Power and Pace of The Metre.

 

That Carol Ann Duffy

I find a bit stuffy

(I’d tell her this if I should meet her)

“You write your Free Verse.

 (You’ll soon line your purse!)

But me?

I write in Metre”

◄ EMMA, EMMA ENEMA

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John Coopey

Wed 15th Nov 2017 23:16

Each to his own, indeed, Ray.
But me?
I write in metre.

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raypool

Wed 15th Nov 2017 22:57

I'm not being funny John but rhyme is perfect for the kind of humorous poetry you write - what is important is to find the right framework on which to hang ideas - whether free verse of rhyming. Why damn one against the other?
Vive la difference I say and to hell with segregation!

Ray

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John Coopey

Wed 15th Nov 2017 15:17

Thanks, guys. I shall soon be having installed a smart meter.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 15th Nov 2017 14:18

Dying? If so, it's...
More like the dying of the darkest night.
That heralds the wakening dawning's light.

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John Coopey

Tue 14th Nov 2017 17:18

Thanks, MC. We seem to be a dying breed.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 14th Nov 2017 16:52

Totally agree. Well said, that man!
Making a point?
Don't like to disjoint
Lines that beg to be neater?
It's hardly a crime
To prefer to rhyme -
And sweeter when tuned to the Metre!

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