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At Least We Tried.

 

The sky is a crying denial for you

And the fabric of mind, fragile as fear

But not see-through.

Your eyes like burning suns,

Slowly blistered heart,

Desperate disintegration.

 

The wind stopped blowing,

Stopped blowing for you

How you could never understand

We exist under the same clouds, the same stars,

The same insane search for soul.

 

I do not blame you.

 

As we gaze at the same darkness of night,

One dead, one alive,

At least we tried.

◄ Man of Many People.

Logic, Reason, Perception, Experience. ►

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Lisa Milligan

Wed 31st Mar 2010 21:57

This is beautiful. I've been reading your work and you have a great style - I like your word choice, format/flow and subject matter. There's always a little mystery to what you're writing about, but I'm like that too. Or maybe I'm too dense to figure it out. In any case, I like your style.

Lisa

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 8th Dec 2009 21:10

Hi Kealon, I'm just catching up as usual, really enjoyed this, powerful feeling of satisfaction at the end, great work, Jeff

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Dave Bradley

Sun 8th Nov 2009 21:31

Hi Kealan

Thanks for commenting on mine. I would go along with Andy's comment on yours - interesting idea

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Andy N

Sun 8th Nov 2009 16:50

very lyrical, m8 but nice.. i think you could make this into a song for some reason..

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