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'Unpopular Music' by Robert C Gaulke is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week

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The New Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Unpopular Music’ by Robert C Gaulke, who describes himself on his Write Out Loud profile as a high school teacher and songwriter living in the Bronx, New York. In his answers to Write Out Loud’s questions, Robert says he curates a twice-monthly songwriter showcase. His favourite poet/poem? There are “too many to mention”.  He believes he started writing poetry at the age of eight.

 

 

What got you into writing poetry?

Hmm. I don't think I had a choice in the matter.

 

How long have you been writing poetry?

My mother recently told me I began at the age of eight.

 

Do you go to any open mic nights?

We had the makings of a healthy scene here, then the bar kicked us out for a dj. I currently curate a twice-monthly songwriter showcase.

 

Your favourite poet/poem?

Too many to mention. I read a lot of 20th century Indian poetry in English; it helped me get through the death of my father. My mother died last week, so perhaps I'll find something new to read.

 

You're cast away on a desert island ... what's your luxury?

My girlfriend's definitely a luxury.

 

 

 

UNPOPULAR MSUIC

by Robert C Gaulke

 

I want to tell you 

tell you a secret

you have to promise

not to hear it 

 

I’m in front of you 

with my emotions

under my clothes

I’m naked

 

I’m gonna play

unpopular music

I don’t want you

to sing along

 

I’m gonna play 

unpopular music 

don’t dance to it

you’ll break an arm

 

these young people

everywhere 

I love them 

in my own way 

 

I see them hurting

with questions

I know what they feel

but can’t explain 

 

how they need 

unpopular music 

to fill in lines 

without names 

 

how they sing

unpopular music 

it’s something 

they can’t explain 

 

just knowing 

needing to be knowing

something in the universe 

feels the same 

 

 

 

 

 

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 28th Sep 2017 14:07

The insightful-ness of this piece - just kind of 'racketing along' - is outstanding. Just like life!

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carol falaki

Sat 23rd Sep 2017 15:02

Interesting, the author lives in the Bronx and the words apply to young people everywhere.
This poem does improve each time you read it.

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Stu Buck

Thu 21st Sep 2017 17:20

interesting piece this. i disliked it on first reading, but it drew me back in and i have now read it about a dozen times through. very much like a song that doesnt strike you at first but then becomes your favourite, while the instantly catchy piece fades to the background. i now find this to be fascinating and well constructed. a bit like jarvis cocker writing a nursery rhyme

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Anna Ghislena

Thu 21st Sep 2017 13:32

This poem's subject is close to my own heart and I love the way Robert has achieved huge depth using simplistic vocabulary. Music has the power to provide a sense of belonging to many young people trying to discover themselves and the world they are in. Robert has captured this view perfectly. I enjoyed this very much!

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Martin Elder

Mon 18th Sep 2017 09:37

I like the way you talk about your vulnerability and that of young people, how we can all get sucked into music that is popular. I agree young people need to hear more unpopular music. This piece also has a nice rhythm to it
congratulations on POTW

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 18th Sep 2017 08:15

It is a very worthy winner, having an apparent simplicity that belies its layers. I also love the idea that Robert is a songwriter-poet, something we are hoping to explore in the Marsden the Poetry Village initiative together songwriters and poets in shared workshops.

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Greg Freeman

Sun 17th Sep 2017 10:42

The words appear simple, but they ask all sorts of questions about the appeal of popular music. The title, and many of the lines, upturn expectations. The author is a songwriter. I like this a lot.

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