'Happy Tuesday' by Lisa C Bassignani is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week

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The new Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘Happy Tuesday’ by Lisa C Bassignani - a lip-smacker of a poem with ingredients that include an “extra-tall margarita”, chips and a “king-size” burrito, as well as “fajitas sizzlling at the next table” and “the aroma of onions”. It’s a poem about a moment – and then the moment is gone. On her Write Out Loud profile page Lisa says she is “an artist of many mediums and styles”.  As well as poetry and short stories, “when I am not writing I am engaged in some artistic journey or another. I enjoy painting, crochet, papier mache, decoupage, beading and jewellry making, gardening, cooking, various forms of sculpture and so much more.”

 

HAPPY TUESDAY 

by Lisa C Bassignani

 

Extra large booth

Extra tall margarita

Chips and salsa

And a king size burrito

Mexican love songs and mariachi music 

Piped softly overhead

Smiling faces, laughter

Twinkling lights and colorful flags

A shrine to los muertos

Fajitas sizzlling at the next table

The aroma of onions as loud as the noise 

Lost in the ambience

 "Will there be anything else?"

The moment gone

I gather my thoughts and my things

Pay the tab and go home

Just another day in the life

 

 

◄ 'Poetry is the shortest way of conveying something really big': JCC on Desert Island Discs

Poetry that really matters: Ann Gray (part one) ►

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 12:18

Thank You...to Everyone!
It has been an honor having my work chosen for the week. I love all the comments and my bouquet is busting out of the vase! 🌷🌷.
The support and camaraderie has been wonderful at WOL, not to mention the learning experience. You're a great, talented and interesting bunch.
Keep thinking and writing.

Lisa

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raypool

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 11:39

An enjoyable orgy of imagery , sights sounds and smells . How to conjure up atmosphere. Great stuff and congratulations Lisa!

Ray

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Rose Casserley

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 09:32

all the thumbs I have are upturned in your honour Lisa-pity I ain't got more than two. No doubt you will be wearing that crown again.







Rose 💋

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 2nd Aug 2019 20:57

Congratulations, Lisa.

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afishamongmany

Wed 31st Jul 2019 21:45

Well done Lisa - a moment captured like a butterfly in cupped hands. Next stop Madam Tussaud's? 😃 ><>

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kJ Walker

Wed 31st Jul 2019 20:19

Congratulations on POTW.

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Peter Taylor

Wed 31st Jul 2019 03:44

Hi Lisa,

Congratulations on POTW!

A note of sadness here as well? The diner not managing to communicate the thing that's missing; eating lots alone, getting home alone? Is Happy Tuesday what the restaurant does to attract Tuesday traffic – good deal on burritos that night?

And "los muertos" – who are they and what do they signify?

For me, this is full of enigma and I really enjoyed it.

Peter T

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trevor homer

Tue 30th Jul 2019 13:32

Smells good to me - congrats. Trevor

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 29th Jul 2019 22:55

I know what you mean Tom! So much excellent writing and not enough time.

Thanks again everyone. ❤

"Happy Tuesday" is a real thing for me. I just happened to be at the Mexican restaurant on a Tuesday night. Obviously a winning combination😊

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Devon Brock

Mon 29th Jul 2019 21:33

Congrats! Lisa. Loved it the first time through, loving it still. "Aroma of onions as loud as the noise"! Grab another 'rita, some chips and salsa, and enjoy. Well deserved.

D

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Tom

Mon 29th Jul 2019 16:20

Nice work Lisa, I'd missed this one. Luckily I read it just before lunch as it made me quite hungry!

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Mae Foreman

Mon 29th Jul 2019 12:27

Congratulations dear Lisa! Well deserved! 🎈
Thank you 🎈
Mae

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 29th Jul 2019 10:47

WOW! What a wonderful surprise to wake up to!
Thank you all SO MUCH!!!

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keith jeffries

Mon 29th Jul 2019 10:34

Well done and well deserved. Keith

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Martin Elder

Mon 29th Jul 2019 09:44

What a delicious poem. I think I need to go and eat now. Thanks for posting Lisa

congratulations on POTW

Nice one

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