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Beyond the Equinox

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Beyond the Equinox

 

The land sleeps,

furrowed, cold and still.

Each field edge mourns

in widow’s weeds.

The flocks keep silence

on the hill,

while nature weeps

tomorrow’s seeds.

 

Penitent

in golden cloak,

the woodland

whispers overhead

and through the mist,

like incense smoke,

sheds slow confetti

for her dead.

 

No birdsong

breaks these solemn days -

wreathed in cobweb,

edged with frost.

The hedge,

a thorny garland lays,

in tribute to

the season’s lost.

 

This tired landscape

bows her head

in memory of

her verdant birth.

In jewelled robe

she bears her dead,

with reverence,

to the waiting earth.

 

 

 

 

deathautumn

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PAAARRRTTTYYY!!!!! ►

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<Deleted User> (8943)

Tue 15th Mar 2011 21:37

So melancholy, I have tears, I've always loved autumn, this is a different look at the pre-winter season, very moving...

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sian howell

Tue 17th Nov 2009 20:57

this is a best thing I have read in ages and when I heard you read it ...i loved the poem even more . Sian x

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Steve Regan

Fri 2nd Oct 2009 12:04

Yes, an oft-visited theme is autumn, or late-autumn as this seems to be. The heighted language, the elegant tone, the evocation of the magic of a landscape which dies and renews, which isn't human, but lives. All beautifully done here, Anthony. And I haven't even listened to the audio clip yet!!

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Chris Dawson

Thu 1st Oct 2009 17:18

Like it.
Cx

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Cate Greenlees

Sun 27th Sep 2009 16:11

How nice to see you back Anthony, weve not heard from you for a while.... and in such fine form too. Your clever use of imagery and language is always a joy to read.
Cate xx

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Francine

Fri 25th Sep 2009 03:35

So nice to hear your lovely voice Anthony!

This poem for me is so profound, beautifully written with distinct imagery that portrays a sadness for those who have passed on...

These lines express that well for me...
'No birdsong
breaks these solemn days -
wreathed in cobweb,
edged with frost.
The hedge,
a thorny garland lays,
in tribute to
the season’s lost.'

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Sep 2009 18:07

Lovely poem, Anthony, with interesting imagery. I could see Steve's point; verse 2 is outstanding in its creative metaphors. But I did enjoy the whole effortless flow of words, rhythm and rhyme. Very catchy title.
It's great to see someone else willing to be 'unabashedly lyrical' also. I was thinking of you earlier today, and wondering if all was well. And here you are this afternoon.

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Isobel

Thu 24th Sep 2009 13:36

I'm not normally one to appreciate a nature poem but have to take my hat off to you Anthony - the poem is beautiful to read and to listen to. You would probably like me to criticise it - but I am never too good at that - just know what I like and what has obviously been grafted over.

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John Darwin

Thu 24th Sep 2009 10:47

Hi Anthony, not usually taken with this subject matter but this reads beautifully, really enjoyed it.

thanks
John

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Dave Bradley

Thu 24th Sep 2009 09:46

Sheer quality. Keats eat your heart out! In agreement with Gus and (as ever) entertained by Steve.

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 24th Sep 2009 07:47



Good Morning AE
A tale told a thousand times... this so illustrative... liken to a ornate victorian landscape painting, superb detail and imagery... well done , superb.
Gus

<Deleted User> (6534)

Thu 24th Sep 2009 07:07

er nice one
love poems containing the word verdant

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