No Title.
''I rescued you from the gutter!'' he said.
and i was forever grateful.
(dedicated to my ex husband.)
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Comments
Hi Janet, short and pithy. Nice one!
Cate xx
Hi Janet
Liked this, added to greatly by the dedication.
win
Hi Janet.
I can't imagine you in any gutter. But then, diamonds and gold have to be mined from the earth . . .
Regards,
A.E.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Fri 25th Sep 2009 11:26
Thankyou all for comments.
Andy- there is a note of sarcasm in the title.x
Fri 25th Sep 2009 11:18
Very pithy Janet.
Regards Yolande
phew - that carries some power! You know what I am like for short short poems sometimes.. Pity there is no title - I would probably do a title that about twenty lines long and has nothing to with the poem itself - lol.. Would like to see more in this style!
<Deleted User> (6484)
Thu 24th Sep 2009 09:44
agree with previous comments Janet.
good un.
Bernie
Deborah Jordan Bailey
Wed 23rd Sep 2009 19:57
and he never even noticed you were looking at the stars...
i agree with Steve..excellent Janet..
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Jon
Thu 1st Oct 2009 14:34
Hi Janet,
Like this one! Nice hint of sarcasm,and a feeling of power and self-realisation here! Johnboy