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IS IT POSSIBLE OR JUST A DREAM

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I would love to experince

a love that is:

real

lasts thru all up's and down's

is gentle but firm when needed

A love that is:

friendship

and forgiveness when respect has been breached

that cares how words effect the other

A love...that does not try to own

but to be with

one that can be taken to the grave.

By Lynn Hahn

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lynn hahn

Thu 2nd Feb 2017 21:45

Just finished a session with my therapist. He would agree with your Randall and Tom. I am to find my princess and to learn to love and respect her in this manner and for her to do so for others.
Life often leaves me scratching my head. Poetry is my other therapist and my crossword puzzles. Keeps my mind growing and my mental outlook growing as well.
So appreciate the poets on this site! The insights shared are really helpful

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Randall Eckstein

Thu 2nd Feb 2017 12:48

It's something of a platitude, now, but to find that kind of love for myself in my own heart is my goal. To truly, unequivocally love myself. I don't think I'll ever find an outward love like this, but if I can respect myself, forgive myself, and curtail my self-reproach I am sure I would live without regret. ?

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Tom Doolan

Thu 2nd Feb 2017 09:17

“You don't find love, it finds you. It's got a little bit to do with destiny, fate, and what's written in the stars.”
Nice work Lynn :)

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lynn hahn

Thu 2nd Feb 2017 05:14

So true Juan. I hope we are blessed and can bless another.

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Wed 1st Feb 2017 22:35

I ? this poem Lynn. I pray we both experience that real love. The thing is that we have to learn to give that type of love out because that is how it comes back around.
Thanks for sharing.

Juan

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