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#themoonandi

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The night is black.
The night is cold.

Oh how full shes appears tonight,

The moon.

she so shines bright.
All alone

she lights up the sky.
Some stars.
scattered near by.
Here i stand. 
alone.
on this cold night.
To the stars and moon i look tonight. 
The dark sea.
she splashes.
At my feet.
The silver sand.
she surrounds my toes.
Naked.
Oh yes.
I feel the breeze.
Golden nectar.
 poured down onto me.
From crown to toe.
Golden yellow.
The stars they glow.
Now i stand.
Golden yellow. 
Naked.
Out in the cold.
Behind me she stands.
This pale white magnificent beast.  
A Powerful unicorn.
Her Head held high.
Her horn so bright.
On this cold night.
Together as one we run.
Along this beach.
The salty sea, she moves with me.
From unicorns horn the nectar has come.
Golden yellow.
Now she says

call to her.
The moon,she implied.
She will hear your cry.
Here she stands.

Behind my back.
Ready to protect from any hand.
And now the dolphins splash.
Yes they splash.
In the moons sight.
Together as one we catch her eye.
The trees they bend.
Yes they bend and whistle in the nights wild wind.

At one i am.
Together as one.
With the wind i twist and turn. 
As i move these hips.
Out loud i cry.
To this goddess, of such divine light.
"Oh great moon.
see me here. On this night. As i dance.
wont you shine your light. So bright. 
on to me.
I beg you please. 
Hear my cry".
Golden skin it shines so bright.
Golden nectar.
From crown to toe.
As i twist and turn on this night.
"Yes Rebecca".
The moon she replies.
"Yes I see you there.
dancing.
at one.
Soul at peace.
Mind connected to the most high.
On this night".

Mighty moon 
oh so bright.
She Engolves me with all her light.
As i close my eyes.
open up, dose  my third.
In this bubble.
Yes i rise.
Protection from her light.
Up i rise into the night.
Above the trees i spin so high.
Naked.
Spirit now golden yellow.
Im amongst the stars.
How Freely i have become to float.
Connected her and i.
On this night.
We dance as one.
The stars.
The moon
And i.
Yes the moon!
She heard my cry.
Together as one.
Her and i.

#themoonandi

By RJC

 

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Rebecca John-charles

Sun 22nd Jan 2017 23:33

Thank You for your lovely comments. Im super happy you liked the moon and i. Espically as this is my first poem.

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AM Cash

Sun 22nd Jan 2017 21:09

Incredible x

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Sun 22nd Jan 2017 08:52

I hope our moon appreciates all the poems that are offered up to her/him/it by the world's writers for surely it's a subject that fascinates so many - perhaps seen as a benign and reliable friend?

There's a good flow to your piece and some lovely imagery but for me maybe just a little too wordy repetitive and less may have achieved more in the long run.

"my words laid end to end were like a staircase to the moon"

thanks for posting Rebecca. Look forward to reading some more from you. Colin

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Raj Ferds

Sun 22nd Jan 2017 07:44

Absolutely gorgeous Rebecca. You got me there. Made me an active participant in the entire episode. Together as one.

Marvelous imagery and excellent story-telling.

Raj x

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