ALL ABOUT HIM

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HIM

When will it stop

being all about him

Such a short 

affair

Such a strong impact...

 

NEVER

You never 

existed

You were a fragment

of my imagination

A fling

that offered a ring

For a price

I could not afford...

 

WIFE

Babe be my wife

give me your life

Like a mail order

bride

Like I had no pride

too mild 

for a thought or a need

Had to plead

to be set free

from the hold he had on me...

 

NUMB

I have never craved

a man

Like I did you

A fantasy in my head

is all that is left...

 

FIRE

A fire that burned

thru my heart

and passion

Sexual heights

not imagined

Then like an orgasm

you were gone...

By Lynn Hahn

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Jeff

Sun 22nd Jan 2017 06:52

I agree with Martin & discounting the content, which is superb, the lay out grabs you immediately. Like a series of short plays that give a huge amount of images, & punches you in the gut at the end......picture of you in monochrome just sets the whole thing off too......thanks for sharing.....Jeff.

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lynn hahn

Sat 21st Jan 2017 22:19

Thanks the photo is of me when I was a Hollywood starlet lol

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Martin Elder

Sat 21st Jan 2017 22:12

that last stanza is quite mind blowing Lynn. Particularly
'Then like an orgasm you were gone'
it's like it has been cut dead.
Fabulous

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