War and the Universe

and when you look up and

watch the carmine sunset riding the clouds,

 

know that those are the blood

of the universes that fought so valiantly

 

to have our constellations vibrant and incandescent

in their boundless mausoleums.

hopelovewar

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Footprints in the Sand ►

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 16th Jan 2017 09:44

yes - with a few Greek Gods waving from the stars maybe - lots to be found within these six lines Tristan - the universe explored.

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Sydney Southers

Mon 16th Jan 2017 04:24

Loved the imagery in this poem!

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Tristan Ayran

Sun 15th Jan 2017 17:04

Life experiences, mostly. Dreams, wishes, hopes.

YASMINE ABBOTT

Sun 15th Jan 2017 16:13

Hello,

I am wondering what inspires you to write your pieces?

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Tristan Ayran

Sun 15th Jan 2017 14:47

Your words are kind, Ray. You have no idea how much these praises mean to someone just starting to fall in love with poetry.
Tristan

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raypool

Sun 15th Jan 2017 14:42

A succinct idea that spreads into the subconscious mind and swells into images - a sense of primeval rightness for me. Please more in this vein!

Ray

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