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My mom lives in my heart

Of my world she is a special part

Lots of care and unlimited love

Shes an angel from heaven above

She gives me food and drops me to school

In my life she sets all the rules

Even she scold and yells at me

In her eyes love is what i See

Sometimes i may cause you pain

But i know your darling I will remain

You will always be in my heart

Even though we are miles apart

I love you always and forever

No one can compare to you ever

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Preeta Sanjith

Mon 9th Jan 2017 10:25

It was written a long time ago when i was in a part of my school project....I was travelling for some competition and missing my mom terribly...though thoughts and sentiments would still remain the same even today,,,In fact miles apart being more relevant today than anytime else....?

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Sun 8th Jan 2017 01:52

Beautiful poem
If you don't mind me saying it first seemed like it was written from the perspective of a young child (Mom sets all the rules) but then at the end the perspective change to that of an adult who moved out (miles apart) and is giving mom well deserved props.
However, the line " Even she scolds and yells at me" seems to needs editing

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