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clearer stars tonight,

but dreams are essential too:

by morning, a song.

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Haiku Collection #2 ►

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Robert Mann

Tue 2nd Aug 2016 01:20

Adam - like this one a great deal. Does what a good haiku should in my opinion. Nice work.
Rob

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Stu Buck

Tue 2nd Aug 2016 00:36

this is a lovely, mysterious haiku full of imagery and questions. superb last line as well. really superb.

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