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you always wanted more

you always wanted more

much more than I could give

more than was reasonable

more than seemed right.

you always wanted more.

 

you wanted the moon

the stars in the sky

the heart and the soul

of the universe

you always wanted more.

 

these are the words

you said to me

but none of them are true

I only wanted you

to love me.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 25th May 2016 14:56

Thank you, Harry :o)

Rob - thanks for comment. It was really a fictional tale of a one sided relationship, but I expect it's how women in that situation would see it. x

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Robert Mann

Tue 24th May 2016 17:12

Lynn - thank you for clearing that up. I always wondered what a woman wanted. Nice writing.
Rob x

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 24th May 2016 13:48


Very female Lynne.

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Lynn Dye

Mon 23rd May 2016 22:37

Thank you for your lovely comments, Rose, Phil, Stef and Patricia.

Phil - fortunately, no, it's not autobiographical.

Lynn xxx

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Sun 22nd May 2016 23:41

brill stuff Lynn.We loved it.


P&S.xx

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Various

Sun 22nd May 2016 22:10

The farewell to many a waste of ungrateful takers.... Such a one sided relationship. I hope it wasn't autobiographical.
xxx
Thank yo.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 22nd May 2016 20:43

really nice poem Lynn.Well done!


Rose.x

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