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'Cursed Be He That Moves My Bones' by Ian Whiteley is Poem of the Week

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The new Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is the timely ‘Cursed Be He That Moves My Bones’, by Ian Whiteley. It’s a sonnet whose title comes from the inscription on William Shakespeare’s tomb, in the week of the 400th anniversary of the Bard's death, and concludes: “In that poetic threat I see at last / the future reaching back to touch the past.”  One fan of the poem commented: “A fine sonnet and a fine tribute.” On his profile page, Ian tells us that he was born in Wakefield, and now lives in Wigan, and regular attends the “marvellous Write Out Loud open mic sessions at the Old Courts in Wigan”. He is also a member of the Black Horse Poets in Wakefield, and holds the title of 'Black Horse Poet of the Year 2015'. After being made redundant in 2012 he “started to take poetry seriously”. He performs and records poetry and music under the name of The Crows of Albion, and has also formed Bard Company, a performance poetry group with fellow poets and Write Out Loud contributors Jefferama!, Gordon Zola and Tony Kinsella.

His second collection of poems, The Cycle of the Scarecrow, was described by reviewer Laura Taylor as “employing an impressive array of poetic form and technique, including terza rima, kyrielle, villanelle, pantoum, haiku, four (count ‘em) types of sonnets, concrete, found, and ekphrastic poetry”.

 

 

Cursed Be He That Moves My Bones

by Ian Whiteley

 

“Good friend for Jesus sake forbeare,

To dig the dust enclosed here.

Blessed be the man that spares these stones,

And cursed be he that moves my bones.”

 

 

How often did I studiously fail

to untangle your brier patch of words.

Encouraged by my teachers to prevail

in setting free the frustrated songbirds,

so that their melody could swell the heart

of English folks rich tapestry of life,

and each actor could undertake the part

of king or fool in comedy or strife.

 

Four hundred years have passed and here I stand

upon your simple worn and trampled stones

and read the curse you placed upon the hand

who would dare take away your buried bones.

In that poetic threat I see at last

the future reaching back to touch the past.

 

 

 

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 1st May 2016 19:51

good spot John - amended on the blog.
Regards his skull - the rumour is that his skull was stolen and is not in the grave - but the church won't allow excavation of his tomb - stating the 'curse' as old Bills obvious wish not to be disturbed - which means we won't know for sure - handy for the church eh? *wink*

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John F Keane

Wed 27th Apr 2016 22:40

Nice sonnet but shouldn't 'folks' have a possessive apostrophe?

Also, wasn't the bard's skull stolen, curse or no? A good subject for another sonnet, perhaps.

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 26th Apr 2016 17:05

Thanks so much you wonderful people - humbled and proud - thanks for reading and commenting
Love & Peace
Ian

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Laura Taylor

Tue 26th Apr 2016 15:58

Well done Ian :)

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Helen Elliott

Mon 25th Apr 2016 21:55

Brilliant! Effortless and thoroughly deserving of the recognition :)

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Andy Sewina aka Danny Wise

Mon 25th Apr 2016 21:36

Great work, and the last line is haunting! Nicely!!!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Apr 2016 16:01

Finely wrought construction - it persuades the reader of its merits with an ease that belies the effort that was
undoubtedly employed.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 25th Apr 2016 15:10

Well done, Ian, and well chosen, Staff.

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Stu Buck

Mon 25th Apr 2016 10:25

quite right too.

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