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Ghost Dancer

We danced to Cuban rhythms 
Late into the night 
I twirled my skirts in girlish glee
Giggling in delight
My heart it started pounding 
As you held me tight
I waited for the kiss
That would bring me back to life 
Then
Brutally it struck me
At the stroke of midnight
You were just an apparition
Your kiss turned into frostbite 
A phantom on the dance floor 
A cruel trick of the light
You melted into nothing
Just a shadow in the moonlight

(C) Pixievic 

 

(included in Andy N's GhostStories Blog

click on the link to read the whole thing.....!)

http://ghoststoryiii.blogspot.co.uk/2016/04/part-v-i-and-v-ii-and-ghost-dancer-by.html

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Vicki Ayers

Sat 9th Apr 2016 13:10

Thanks Martin - I hoped you could...!!
Tommy :)) back at ya xx

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 8th Apr 2016 13:17

:-)

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Martin Elder

Thu 7th Apr 2016 13:29

very, very nice poem Vicki I can just picture the scene.

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