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Nervous -- 07/2015

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Sitting

Waiting

Thinking

Flaking

Run until you can't stop

Go before your bubble pops

Breathe

Relax

Short and deep

How can this be?

Shush!

Just wait and see

Nice and easy

One step at a time

It'll all be fine

Sitting

Waiting

Thinking

Staying

nervous   crush   newlove   love   timid   scared   waiting   thinking

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Amanda Van Gorder

Sun 1st Nov 2015 18:25

Thank you! When I wrote it I thought the same thing about wanting it to go longer, but I couldn't get it to continue in the right way, so I stopped it short.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 1st Nov 2015 16:34

This has such a breathless pace Amanda. I wanted it to be five times longer at least. Well done!

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