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Crush -- 07/2015

The speed

The rush

My face turns flushed

I'm being crushed

By your presence

Can't stand your absence

Laying, relaxing with you

It doesn't matter what we do

Quietly watching TV

Intertwined, breathing heavily

Or cracking up, acting a fool

Its not like back when I was in school

But its true

I like you

And I'm hoping you like me too


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Daydreams -- 07/2015 ►


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Amanda Van Gorder

Thu 29th Oct 2015 16:22

Thank you! Its really the little things that make us fall for someone. It doesn't have to be grand and flamboyant like in the movies. Its really just daily "normal" activities and before you know it well, you Want them around all the time.

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Thu 29th Oct 2015 07:19

I like this one Amanda - reminds me of my own shortie poems I write for a special friend - little moments in time - nothing immensely deep and meaningless which garners endless discussion in comment boxes - just an expression of an emotion - particularly liked 'quietly watching tv, intertwined, breathing heavily, or cracking up, acting a fool.'

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