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I'm looking for a mountain
To buy
I have a river
Fluid and gentle
Running along forests, skipping stones
Snaking its dampened path
Wet and wild
Meeting you
In seductive pools of pleasure.
Yet, I want to buy a mountain
Immovable
Immobile
Stoic, and unrelenting.
Because I want to lose.
love this, just came home from a mountain, id like to buy one myself.
Great feel to this Preeti. It has a languid atmosphere, and a sort of materialistic impasse at the end. As if the wanting is a sort of submission to the inevitable. Very nice.
Fri 21st Aug 2015 11:44
Preeti, this is so lovely - that river sounds magnificent - not sure that I'd recommend mountains, but I'm sure they have their uses. Great work x
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Tom Harding
Fri 28th Aug 2015 17:36
This is very nice, a beautiful evocation