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Don't be.
Your prickliness is amusing. Grow a pair.
Boobs/balls.
Calm your tits. Thrilled to bits,
I smile a smile.
Then I smile some more.
Comments
Nice and playful and maybe like a kaleidoscope that you shake and another idea comes up - jagged in a way!
Preeti Sinha
Wed 5th Aug 2015 18:10
Thanks Graham :) The bodily parts just happened, tumbled through :0
Final smile? It's almost a smirk, mission accomplished kind of. Not smug tho. Hate smug.
The smiling is wry I think!
Boobs, balls, tits, you've even mentioned a prick(liness) well done for this very short, caustic, rant.
The final smile is self-satisfying.
Graham
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Corr Lens
Sat 8th Aug 2015 13:01
loving how short your new work is! fucking perfect.