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I Used to be Defensive

I used to be defensive when you said that I was wrong.

I used to be defensive when you silenced every song.

I used to be defensive when you made a single slight.

I used to be defensive just assuming you were right.

I used to be defensive when absorbing your perspective.

I used to be defensive when I couldn’t be reflective.

I used to be defensive now I know I have a choice.

I used to be defensive now I validate my voice.

I used to be defensive couldn't learn or just discard.

I used to be defensive when acceptance was too hard.

I used to be defensive now you’re neither fact nor fiction.

I used to be defensive now I have my own conviction.

◄ I Wanna

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Comments

Lan

Mon 6th Apr 2015 09:54

Hi Nat, it is uncanny how I will be either thinking about something or write something and then read your latest stuff and it will feel like maybe you're in a similar place - I really like & appreciate it - kindred spirit type stuff, thanks :) x

Preeti Sinha

Sun 5th Apr 2015 07:04

I love such coming of age pieces !

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Apr 2015 18:38

Nice song-like rhythm and good rhyming in your message. One small caveat:
why not include "a" before choice to keep the rhythm in
line 7?

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Martin Elder

Thu 2nd Apr 2015 18:44

You have convinced me. This flows along nicely under it's own steam. marvellous.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 1st Apr 2015 22:11

Nat,
twelve defensives...and only one conviction?

You fibber!

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