Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Menage A Trois

entry picture

Menage A Trois

The creeping half-light
casts unnatural shadows
on a cooling path.

Silver sister moon
bites down hard on the sky king,
silencing bird song.

This, being England,
she does beneath a cloud veil
of shy modesty.

Unbelievers still
raise their eyes to the heavens
in acts of worship.

Magic or science -
or just something poetic
on a spring morning?

When the sun returns
it has a blush of red cheeks
where it has been kissed.

The world turns in space,
a voyeur waiting the next
brief ménage a trois.

eclipsehaikusloversmagicscience

◄ Wide Is The Gate And Broad Is The Road

Dockery Plantation Blues ►

Comments

Profile image

John Coopey

Sat 21st Mar 2015 20:49

We got a great view of it in a cloud free sky here in Selby. It didn't darken as such but the light had a quality about it redolent of sunset.

Profile image

Harry O'Neill

Sat 21st Mar 2015 09:06


I like the delicacy of this Ian. (particularly stanza three)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 20th Mar 2015 15:14

no apology required big guy-words are free after all.But had that poem been published,we might have had to arrange a rendezvous in court! haha! muchly liking your line useage of,as much as you liked our Silver sister titled poem.xx

Travis Brow

Fri 20th Mar 2015 14:30

Lovely penultimate verse, Ian.

Profile image

Ian Whiteley

Fri 20th Mar 2015 13:47

that is more than spooky guys - given that I laboured over a moon description and had about five other twists on those words. Hadn't read your 2012 effort as it was before my WOL entity - but just had a look and really like 'Silver Sister' - very evocative. I would apologise for my usage had it been deliberate - but as it wasn't - I will claim it as 'white magik' ;-)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Fri 20th Mar 2015 13:00

'silver sister' same description as the title of our poem-25th May 2012-spooky eh?

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message