For An Afternoon

your fingers
shadowed on the grass
the soft
sound of the leaves
rushing
in a pass of breath
as it begins
to rain

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◄ For An Evening

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 18th Dec 2014 12:49

Super, but I would have liked another couple of lines. Don't be so mean with us please

Well Done,

regards,

Graham

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UInk

Sat 13th Dec 2014 02:12


simply beautiful

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