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For Loki

For Loki;


Oh Lopt, the slandered god, I judge you not.
Your actions seem unjust or selfish,
but they are not.
They are quite the opposite.
You, the Wily Giftbringer,
what would the mighty gods be,
if you hadn't cut off the Lady's hair?
Hotheaded and sly,
you made the gods stronger,
through your mischief.

What of the walls of Asgard?
Without you, oh Loke,
they would be vulnerable,
against the Jotuns.
You had the walls built,
for next to nothing.
In your deemed foolishness,
gave birth to Sleipnir,
the Mighty Steed of One Eye.
A selfish god would not of done that,
give away his blood to his blood.

Bane of Baldur,
the paradoxical god,
restored order,
by guiding Hod's hand.
Many deem this as heinous,
and arguably treacherous,
but they do not realize,
the importance of your role:
You restore order,
and cause disorder.

Father of Lies,
you are called.
This is slander,
through your flyting,
you made light of the dark,
the gods hide.

God of Fire,
you are,
many do not know,
Lodur and you,
are the same.
Blood you gave us,
and goodly color.
You know what it means,
to be human,
the only god to know.

LokidevotionAesirHeathenPaganslandergod of firechaosmischief.

◄ The Kill

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Lopt the Treacherous

Fri 3rd Oct 2014 09:59

My style is quite odd but that's not condescending at all, in fact that's quite a compliment haha! Thank you very much. :)

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Dominic James

Fri 3rd Oct 2014 09:33

I completely agree with that last line, though I like to see him called Father of Lies, there is some justice in that. Somewhere between Prometheus and Lucifer, all eyes are on the shape shifter. Your style seems to have its feet in several camps, but I think you're finding your way with this - I hope that doesn't sound condescending, but with the Heroic, old English, the modern... as many feet as Sleipnir in as many different styles. Keep em coming.
Dom.

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