Just In Time

 

Among the grit

The tears 

The nights spent alone

With just a screen 

For company

I almost thought I'd had it

Didn't think I'd see day again

Vision clouded by hiding 

Me from myself

They say 

If you dream you're falling 

And you hit the bottom

You're never going to wake up

Just in time 

I opened my eyes

I told you ►

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Isobel

Wed 10th Sep 2014 20:09

Couldn't put it any better than Cynthia - compelling poetry Jon that come from that raw place inside. I wonder how many of us on here have taken a similar fall - so glad you survived it xxx

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 9th Sep 2014 12:11

Simply put but very compelling.

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chris yates

Sun 7th Sep 2014 21:08

To wake up just in time ... how many of us are hiding our true selves a thought provoking poem ... well done ( : x

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Pauliegreg

Sun 7th Sep 2014 20:53

Loved this poem, Jon.

Glad you woke up in time.

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