Just In Time
Among the grit
The tears
The nights spent alone
With just a screen
For company
I almost thought I'd had it
Didn't think I'd see day again
Vision clouded by hiding
Me from myself
They say
If you dream you're falling
And you hit the bottom
You're never going to wake up
Just in time
I opened my eyes
Simply put but very compelling.
To wake up just in time ... how many of us are hiding our true selves a thought provoking poem ... well done ( : x
Loved this poem, Jon.
Glad you woke up in time.
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Isobel
Wed 10th Sep 2014 20:09
Couldn't put it any better than Cynthia - compelling poetry Jon that come from that raw place inside. I wonder how many of us on here have taken a similar fall - so glad you survived it xxx