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THE HOLE - remembering WW1

In a blood spilled mud filled hole

Lies a body - but no soul.

What was once a hopeful life

Blown to bits in savage strife.

 

A parody of human form

A thing that had been loving...warm,

Face down - obscured from the curious eye

And the mind that silently wonders why.

 

Jutting past the deathly rim

Stands a foot of what remains of him

Like a lonely last salute...

A solitary mud-slimed boot.

 

As his fellows pass the hole

Each reaches out to touch that sole.

And each hand rests in mute farewell

As each man meets his personal hell.

◄ FOOT IN MOUTH

THERE'S NO KNOWING ►

Comments

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 7th Aug 2014 22:58

Sad,sad,sad.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 5th Aug 2014 18:33

Dave - my eyes were at fault. Now amended to how it should be. Sometimes another's vision helps!
Thanks for the comment.

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Dave Bradley

Tue 5th Aug 2014 16:43

Powerful, timely poem. I don't like to pick up on something so striking and poignant but are there meant to be two 'was's' in the 3rd line?

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John Coopey

Tue 5th Aug 2014 16:26

A gruesome but nevertheless real picture of that particular hell, MC. We are indeed fortunate to live in these times and not those.

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