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Creatives Collide

Stop standing on my shadow

Why are you trying to hijack my dreams?

Do you want to be like me?

Do you want to stop me from being myself?


You say you want to inspire me

I feel you conspire against me

Two lovers of creativity

Your opinion of you, far exceeds

That of me.


Edging further forward

Trying to establish yourself

As the master of our trade

At my expense.


With each step you take

On my shadow

I realise

You're not the one for me.


◄ Rainbow

A Letter To Mother ►


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Tommy Carroll

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:28

Yes Helen...but minus the name ;)

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:15

I think this would be good written on note-paper in letter form and jammed behind a mirror and on the envelope written: 'see you? see this!' Tommy

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 13th Jul 2014 15:00

This is very interesting, in subject and development. Would you consider either 'creation' or 'creativity'? (I do realize they are not the same.) Or, perhaps, if they were inverted ... since creation is not possible without creativity. It is just a thought; but it did bump against my mind.

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