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Dropped Phone Call

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I ring you in the usual way
During a early lunch
But you drop the phone
When you hear my voice
Leaving me with nothing
But the droning ambience
Of a lost call.

Perhaps you are still in bed
In the middle of a deep sleep
After a late

Late

Late night

Talking

I had forgotten you mentioning
With a few bottles of wine
At your friend Jane’s
And couldn’t be bothered
Staggering out of bed
To answer the phone,

Or maybe your Cat
Has instead of missing
The dressing table
After jumping from your bed
Has leaped over the suite
Onto the window
And knocked the phone flying
Cutting me off into oblivion.

Perhaps it was a BT error

Or you are on the phone
To your mate, Steve
For one of your epic
Three or four hour calls
Which frequently has me thinking
What the hell
You could talk about
For so long
And is meant to feel minor
When Steve says he sometimes
Talk to one of your ex’s
All night long
Sometimes,

Or maybe you are rushing off
To the shop
Across the road
To pay your lottery ticket
Before rushing off
To your doctors
Then asda up the road
Before it closes
And really
Really
Could not be bothered
Answering my call
At least then.

Whatever reason
It still hasn’t clouded
Over my love
For you.

 

 

(NB. A Short Poem from a ebook of poems I wrote for my partner Cathy called ''Love Songs for Cathy V', of which a hard copy can be bought here - http://www.lulu.com/shop/andy-n/love-songs-for-cathy-v/paperback/product-21381711.html. I will welcomely send over a PDF of the book to anybody if interested free of charge. Email me on aen1mpo@yahoo.co.uk or PM etc.)

◄ Christmas Poem for Cathy (2013)

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Andy N

Sun 5th Jan 2014 14:35

thanks guys. glad you all like this. it is a bit of fun although most of it is true in particular the best about diving cats (one of them missed the windowsill the other night and nearly knocked herself out which would have been worrying if it wasn't so funny - lol)

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Dave Bradley

Sat 4th Jan 2014 22:05

I like this Andy. It takes one so vividly into the situation, into your mind and into the other person's life.

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Gray Nicholls

Sat 4th Jan 2014 13:38

slice of life, andy. can tell you love your other half from this although the teasing stops it going overboard. well done m8. enjoyed this.

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winston plowes

Sat 4th Jan 2014 01:06

Liked this. Another simple and real poem rooted in the real world. Just ordered my 'hard copy' on Lulu. Looking forward to reading the rest of the book.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 3rd Jan 2014 16:22

or maybe you have just not paid your B.T bill, then wait for me to call round when I get no reply to ask why no answer, to which you just tap me up for the money owed - - -

I give it to you without any fuss so next time I phone I hear the voice I love so much.

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