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Fall Into Autumn

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I wandered lonely as a scarecrow,

Braving the crisp October chill,

Watching over the fallow fields,

As the fleeting birds take their fill,

Feasting on fallen abandoned acorns,

In the shadow of a giant elegant oak,

On the horizon home fires are burning,

As a forest of chimneys bellow smoke,

My tattered old raincoat won’t let me down,

Stuffed with the warm golden harvest hay,

A hat and scarf make my ensemble complete,                       

As I brace myself for the sleet on the way,

I want to leap into autumn,

To kick up the leaves of red brown hue,

I want to crash into autumn,

And bathe in its early morning dew,

I want to fall into autumn,

Cool as a breeze that forever blew.

 

 

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Tom Doolan

Thu 31st Oct 2013 21:40

Hi Thomas - thanks for your kind comments. Checked out your work, very perceptive.

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Thomas J Steele

Wed 30th Oct 2013 21:50

That is cracking Tom, beautiful words. This is one I would read again and again. I really did enjoy it, it was very much a pleasure to read.

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Tom Doolan

Tue 22nd Oct 2013 13:13

Thanks guyz for nice comments, you made an old scarecrow happy lol

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Andy N

Thu 17th Oct 2013 12:44

lovely, tom. the use of the first line is quite clever and builds really nicely. well done

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Wed 16th Oct 2013 16:19

very,very nice.I think scarecrows are always a great subject for poems.Thanks Tom.x

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